
In One Piece: Becoming a Marine Admiral Alongside Ace and Luffy!
人在海贼:和艾斯、路飞一起成为海军大将!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 995k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
461Chapters
7.9MReads
156.1kFlowers
10.0Score
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Chinese people have never been qualified to criticize a parent who participated in the revolution. You, the author, are not qualified to criticize Dorag. He went to lead the revolutionary army in the revolution. Do you think he went to every family? Bring the kids? Do you want to die? Can't you just stay in your hometown? At least Garp can keep his life safe.
You are kidding. Shaoshao fruit is not as good as rockberry fruit?
Monkey. D. Luffy Saint, Dragon fell in love with her when she was protecting the female Draco, and Luffy was born. However, the Draco did not allow Dragon and the female Draco to be together and forced them to separate. Dragon was furious and judged the navy and established a revolutionary army. He was bound to overthrow the rule of the Draco and be with his beloved.
Didn't you watch One Piece or something? The navy forced Ace's mother to death. Do you think it's possible for Ace to become a navy?
I think Ace will die if he joins the navy, because his political background determines that he cannot join the navy. Just like the leaders of the two camps, their children will not be accepted into their own camp by the other party.
Luffy's mother was taken as a slave by Tenryu Im. It's really funny that you joined the navy.
The shoulder height is 10m, the body length is 30m, only 20 tons? Is the body stuffed with cotton? And that [Absolutely Real Injury], I spent hundreds of words describing how awesome it is, and the last sentence is ineffective against the natural element of the armed sea floor stone. I was stunned. What else can this useless ability be used for?
Why did the author write about the fire unicorn? I'm stupid. Logically speaking, unicorn should correspond to earth, but I can't tell the difference between fire. Fire is Suzaku. Don't you think it overlaps with unicorn? I feel that unicorn's written ability should be to control the earth element and control luck. After all, unicorn is an auspicious beast.
To be honest. I quite dislike the character of Kirby. .
I want to say, if you really want to write about sacred beasts, just get to know them and don't blindly follow the impression. First of all, Marco is a phoenix, not a suzaku. These are two kinds of creatures. The phoenix prefers the phoenix but it is different from the phoenix. What is the phoenix? The phoenix is the child of the suzaku. You will know how awesome the suzaku is. Secondly, the white tiger is Geng The representative of gold, the emperor of gold, I didn't see this in the fruit written by the author. The third point is Qilin. The author wrote a fire Qilin. I don't want to say anything. The five major spiritual beasts correspond to five attributes. The east blue dragon, the west white tiger, the south Suzaku, the north Xuanwu Qilin, which are gold, wood, water, fire and earth. The author made the Xuanwu into the ice type...