An Unexpected Journey into Dream of the Red Chamber with the Heroes of Might and Magic System
乱入红楼之英雄无敌系统
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 156k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Novel Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
46Chapters
1.5MReads
12.5kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 9
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Am I mistaken, the male protagonist is Jia He's illegitimate son, and he fell in love with Yuanchun at first sight. Are you sick?
From the first chapter to the twenty-fifth chapter, the protagonist enters the imperial capital. You are really a talent. Why do you write so many introductions? The first chapter is just an introduction. No one likes to read so many introductions. Even you, the storyteller at the beginning, have written three or four chapters, and you can't be more fluent. The author really recommends that you change it, otherwise no one will read it.
Since it is a new book written by a newcomer, let me give you some advice. People who come to Feilu basically come to read it for fun. You write it well enough. The main character and the supporting characters should not be too mentally retarded. By the way, don't make the main character feel miserable. This is a poisonous point. Also, don't try to sell the book on your own merits. The title and introduction are one thing, but the content is another.
About "Invincible Heroes System of Chaos into the Red Mansion" written by Huangying Muyang 16. Yuanchun Jingse (new book, new book, various requests) Chapter review.
Let's not talk about the structure of this book for now! Let's just say that Song Yao appears, and his identity has been introduced since the first chapter. Good guy, it has been introduced for ten chapters, and then it has been introduced intermittently. Does it mean that every subsequent character needs to be introduced as a whole? After reading Chapter 14, I realized that what I was reading was not the Red Mansions fan novel, but "The Autobiography of Song Yao"!
First time writing a book. Posted in Feilu because I like the atmosphere here. I don't know if what I wrote can meet everyone's aesthetics. I hope everyone will support me! Thanks!!
I read Chapter 12 with my scalp printed on my scalp. This game is really not compatible with Red Mansion. Can't you use Age of Empires or Mounted Blade?
What the fuck are you writing about?
What do you think about playing Heroes of the Invincible in Red Mansions? Too messy