Urban: Playing Odin from the Start

Shanhai is a newcomer who just wrote a book a few days ago. This book is also to commemorate his childhood. When I was a child, I fantasized about being a Kamen Rider and Ultraman every day. This is the first time I write a book of this type. Please point out the bad parts. Thank you for your support, Crab!

I like your theme very much. In an ordinary urban background, the protagonist gains extraordinary power, starts a knightly war, and sits behind the scenes. There were two books about Feilu before, but they became eunuchs after only a few chapters. But what do you say? There are two points. First, there are too many bugs. First, people from strange bureaus come to the door before even a few cards are played. The power of the country is indeed not to be underestimated, but it is not as awesome as you think. Besides, people may not pay attention to this point. There are other strange bureaus. In the ordinary urban world view, there is basically no such thing. At best, it can only be formed after the protagonist becomes extraordinary. If the urban background you set has some kind of dragon group, vampires and the like, then I didn't mention it. Second point, it doesn't matter if you set the background in Japan, but the protagonists of Knight's War are all characters from the original work. What's the point? Aren't you going to change your character, background, and reasons for joining the war?

Magenta Xiao Ming's stats are so high, and there are ways to deal with Shi Wangli. Shi Wangli also relied on sneak attacks to stop Xiaoming. Even half of the power has created the villain of Shi Wangli.

I thought it was Odin, the king of the gods.

In fact, Shun Kageyama (Fist Locust)╳ (Nexus)√

I actually really wanted to write this book, but as you know, people have to eat. My poor grades can only be blamed on my poor writing, so I have no choice but to go to work, but I will come up with a new book when I have time. You have been with me for so long.

The subject matter is quite new, but other aspects are a bit lacking.

Why do you want to weaken super speed? If you weaken it all the way up to the decade level, it means that the original speed has also been weakened. If you say it will be strengthened in the future, who will be strengthened? Can you use a reason to restore all speed knights to their original speed? Even if you strengthen Mirror Knight, that will be fine

I hope the author can make a more heroic exit!

I thought it was Odin in Western mythology. Most of those knights look like bugs