The Last Days: King of the Desperate Realm

The beginning is a poisonous point. If you reveal your identity as a time traveler, aren't you afraid of being sliced ​​into pieces?

I didn't get a good night's sleep, and I had to work at work during the day. My brain was so fuzzy that I could fall asleep even while writing.

Maybe the writing will be good later, but the first chapter is really bad. The male protagonist has the joy of seeing his parents again, but he is more stupid and ignorant.

The protagonist's family is funny

How should I put it? If it were an author elsewhere, the text layout would be correct!! But this is Feilu. I suggest the author take a look at how those people on the Tianbang layout their words.