The Scumbag's Daily Life in a Crossover World

Really, author, I also write a variety comic. The plot of a comprehensive comic is not written like this! Details, foreshadowing, character descriptions! Nothing! The plot develops so fast? And he abandoned his sister! There is no foreshadowing for the conflict, not even the most basic logic! So, where is the fun? Remember, write the plot of the comic! It's the plot that drives the protagonist!

There will be something happening next. Those involved in the incident can choose or you can say it yourself. 1Sisters under the snow 2 Shinomiya Kaguya

The writing is confusing and confusing, and the plot passes before it develops. It's inexplicable.

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Without any logic, it makes no sense.

Since it is too difficult to drink water every day, I want to change the back part. For example, the male protagonist travels through other anime worlds? Do you think you support it? For example, God of High School, there are many people in it that I want to beat up... By the way, this time travel does not mean that you will always be there after traveling through time, but you will just do some tasks and the like. Once you're done, go back to the comic world

The plot is written inexplicably. . . Why did a bunch of bad guys come and beat up the male protagonist? And then he was almost killed? Did he actually shoot someone in the end?

The plot progresses too fast, the characters are not enriched, the logic does not make sense, the details are not written and just skipped, and the next plot is skipped without explanation. As a primary school student under the age of 12, his adoptive parents were hypnotized by the male protagonist and arranged to transfer to another school but not arrange a place to live on the street? After the male protagonist was bullied by gangsters on the street for no reason, he shot four people to death. Then he went abroad to hide and found Yukinoshita Yukino who was abroad. After the first few sentences, he did nothing for two years and then returned to his country? Knowing that her adoptive parents would die, did she abandon Qiong and leave, leaving her alone to face her parents' car accident before running back? After coming back, I registered a rental boyfriend. Such a cool operation? I would like to ask, based on your timeline as the author, from the plot of Nishimiya Glass, I think she was only 12 years old in the 6th grade, and she was only 14 years old when she came back from abroad for 2 years. Her hair has not even grown yet, so she is thinking about other things? There are many others that I won't mention. To be honest, I was really poisoned!

After reading Chapter 7, what should I say? The plot is fast and messy and the main character is a bit fw, I

The plot is too silly, the killings are inexplicable, and the journey abroad is confusing. He promised to find a way to save Kasugano and his wife but skipped it. Suggest rewriting