Mutant Beast: I Turned into a Wolf from the Start

The author is a newbie and has no manuscripts saved. He writes one piece at a time. His hand speed is incomparable to Fat Deer's tentacle monsters. So I don't ask for tickets or flowers (of course, I won't refuse →_→), I just hope that everyone can put forward any comments and suggestions after reading the book. Feedback is also welcome, as long as the author is not allowed to stand alone.

It's not bad, but if someone wants to kill you, it's a little bit poisonous if you don't take revenge.

So far it looks pretty good, but it's too little and needs to be fattened up.

Is there anyone else? I'm a little nervous as a single player.