In Dragon Ball: I Got Legendary Super Saiyan from the Start

Take away both Boomerang and No. 18.

It seems that I am the first one to comment, so I will talk about a few issues in these few chapters. Let me talk about the wording first. I don't want to be too good, but don't use the two words "fuck" and "fuck" anymore. These are words that appear only when there is really no ink and vocabulary in the brain. They are also the kind of live broadcast articles that audience members use as narration. Don't get used to the writing style. Secondly, the writing style. The writing style cannot be improved all at once. It is improving slowly. You can first learn how to reduce useless nonsense words so that readers can read more smoothly and comfortably. Thirdly, improve the character. Improving the character of the protagonist and improving the writing style are the key to attracting a large number of readers. Fourth, the fourth is the most important. The five plots of saint, protect, lick, embarrassing and water. Avoiding these five words will greatly reduce the loss of readers. How to attract readers, refer to the second and third highlights. I hope it will be helpful to the author.

I have a question. The first chapter said "Enter the Dragon Ball world, the location is Earth", and then it said it was Namek. Emmmm. Did I miss something, or did the protagonist just jump from Earth to Namek?

Brother No. 16 Is made of all metal. How can it be absorbed?

It's a bit exaggerated. Goku, who was training in the underworld, only had 40 tons to turn into a Super Saiyan.

What you wrote is too weak. You start a super match with everyone you fight, and your combat power is broken. You can still beat Kamba. The timeline is wrong. The author seems to have never watched Dragon Ball.

Is the Earth or the Planet Namek?

Namek is Namek, where is the Earth?