Starting with the Nine-Tails' Rampage

The writing is messy! While pressing the original novel, the four-generation couple felt so cold that they vowed to change their lives!? *Ma exploded!

How could you choose to save your parents and let them die? What a ** novel?

People who have traveled through time as Naruto like team development, and people who have traveled through time as Sasuke like to have a single family. Why is this?

It's a wave, but it looks cool Come on, author

Ikaru? And nine Xiaoqiang among the twelve Xiaoqiang were originally in the same class...

This is too wasteful, obviously because he thinks he has lived too long.

Isn't it good to use Yongdi Cave Immortal Technique?

The Three Body Art is transformation, clone and double. Where does the instant body come from?!

If the protagonists 1 and 2 can't do it at all, then they have to have the same childhood as the original work.

Commentary on Chapter 49 Gaara vs. Locke Lee, "From the Beginning of the Nine-Tailed Rebellion" written by Hanye Buliang.