
In the Beginning, I Crossed Paths with the Saint, and When I Came Back, I Became a Fairy.
开局与圣女互穿,回来我竟然成仙了
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- Completed
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- 704k Words
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- Urban Romance
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- Urban Superpowers
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- For men
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- 5y ago
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- Faloo
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What should a woman do if she uses the protagonist's body to find a man? Hey-hey
The perspective changes so quickly, it's the male protagonist, and then it's the female protagonist, and when the perspective changes, the names are so confusing! I'm so confused, I can't explain clearly.
When I saw a comment saying that people in the Nascent Soul stage were still afraid of nuclear bombs, I knew I wasn't reading it. Not to mention resisting nuclear bombs in the Nascent Soul stage, you can't run or what, so you're going to let a nuclear bomb blow you up? Then such a zz can become a ghost fairy.
Yuanying is afraid of the police. Can you fly a sword and use a nuclear bomb? Or can't outrun a nuclear bomb? Demolish a military base in one day, gather all your energy and flatten the Pentagon and the White House to show them. If you are still cultivating immortals, you can't even feed pigs. Those in power treat people like ants. How many people have you killed in this other world?
I just want to say that the law restrains ordinary people, and there are some tips to popularize the law. You can destroy Guo with a snap of your fingers during the celestial phase, explode stars with a snap of your fingers during the Yuan Ying phase, and destroy the river system with a wave of your hand during the god transformation phase. You are powerful, who can restrain you?
The author needs to think carefully about the character of the saint. The protagonist can be more cheerful and talkative, and he can be more vocal when fighting with the saint. These are all written without problems, but I think the saint should be more calm. After all, she is not comparable to ordinary people. I imagined that the saint would not talk much, but be a little willful. She would be curious about this new world, and she would gradually fall in love with it. She would also give the protagonist a setback, but basically she would smile a little bit, instead of saying a lot of words. She would try some new food or toys, because no one in this world knows her, so she is very relaxed. As for the emotional line, the author can be more sadistic or cheerful. For example, when two people exchange bodies, their energy is disordered, causing them to be in the same body. Of course, this is only temporary. When the two souls are in the same body, the two start a scolding war, such as gaining more control. The protagonist talks more and mocks the saint. As a result, the saint does not say much and directly makes the protagonist do whatever he wants with his body...
What about chapters sixty and sixty-one? Was he swallowed or was he driving too fast and was stopped?
I still think Huanyan's breakthrough was well written.
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