An unreliable System and an unreliable “kind-hearted” young man: together, they’re way more than twice as unreliable! The protagonist says, “There aren’t many people as kind as me, sigh.” The System replies, “Kind-hearted, my ass! Have you ever seen a kind person casually tear people apart and then scatter their ashes?” This is the story of a young man who loves showing off, only to keep getting a brutal reality check.
Villain: “Who are you?”
Protagonist: “I’m just a Kamen Rider passing through! Don’t forget it!”
And then...
“Ahhhhh! Spare me, hero!”
This is the story of a sleazy young man’s path to strength, and of a “helpful” young man’s growth.
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to real people or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
Author, I have never written a novel, so I know I can't say anything, but as a reader, it was quite uncomfortable to read. The protagonist has character flaws and ups and downs in life. I understand this. However, from the beginning and many chapters later, there is no change at all. The expansion of the protagonist is treated lightly. Yes, but other people's exaggeration is bad, and the writing is very long. I even think that the protagonist is not as good as the supporting role you created. Alas, I know I will definitely be said this and that. After all, I say a lot of things, but I still hope that I can listen to what others have to say, so that I can broaden my own perspective.
In fact, the invincible novels are better to read, the ones that pretend to be invincible all the way. After reading novels for more than ten years, I have always felt that the invincible novels are the best, and the best ones are the ones without any bumps in the road, with a smooth journey.
What's going on? This book is free?
I'm not asking for rewards or anything, I just hope that the viewers can give me more suggestions and point out shortcomings. Rookie writers cannot make progress without the criticism and suggestions of the viewers.
All for free? I don't seem to have seen the VIP chapter.
Author ****, if you have any suggestions or problems, you can contact me to correct me. A new writer cannot make progress without the criticism and suggestions of the audience. The early stage may be a little light, but I will build the subsequent plot with my heart. I hope everyone can support me. I am not asking for rewards or anything, I just hope it can make everyone happy.
The writing is a little awkward, and the first few chapters are completely wasted. . .
I'll give you 5 little red flowers, come on!
Nice, very interesting article, good luck to the author
It ended. I forgot when I started chasing this book. I just remember that Shuhuang saw it in the new library at that time. When I saw the title of the book, my eyes lit up. When I read the introduction, it felt very similar to myself. I also had the idea of ** during the period, but I found it again inexplicably after a while. Maybe I realized at that time that although the author's writing style is very good, the plot is very confusing, and the viewing experience is very poor, it is inexplicably lingering in my mind, and I have been paying attention to it silently. Compared to the author, I feel that I am very lucky and I am watching the author little by little.