I Am the Big Shot in the Myriad Worlds Chat Group

After all, when novels about cultivating immortals first emerged in the past, people in the golden elixir stage could physically travel across the universe, and those who had just become immortals could make up a universe with just one cell.

How should I put it? At most, it is a mid-range match. In fact, it is a low-end match. After all, it has moved to the prehistoric era, so this immortal emperor can only be regarded as the true immortal of the prehistoric era.

After all, many new books are now gone after less than 5 chapters.

Tsk, the writing is okay, but the words are not divided into paragraphs, and the punctuation marks are not incomprehensible, I can't understand, I can't understand.

This is my first time writing a book, so I am quite serious about it, and I will also listen to everyone's opinions. Maybe it's not well written. I will try to correct it. But can you give me some flowers to encourage me? Thank you everyone

Are there Tifa and Mai Shiranui?

To be honest, who are you writing about Armor Warrior for? Child? Let alone adults, most junior high school students don't watch normal movies. I don't quite understand this. To be honest, I haven't watched it since I was a child. This one is a bit off the beaten track (小生bb)

The punctuation marks look uncomfortable

This punctuation mark makes my head hurt

Nine Heavens Mysterious Thunder? What about Zhu Xian? Come on, let's see if you have set up a lot of avenues, are there many more??