Tomb Robbery: Capture Aning and Obtain the Bloodline of Qilin

Author: Have you not seen a woman in 100 million years?

It's really annoying for the protagonist to call other people by the same name. He still calls others "third master" after being systematic. Is it because the protagonist's ancestors were slaves? The slave's bloodline breaks out

I guess the author doesn't even know what he wrote.

Zhang Qiling's grandfather's name was Zhang Qiming? The father is Zhang Qishan. Author, can you think through it?

The beginning is just nonsense. The fruit needs to be developed. Once you eat the fruit, you will be invincible. Why do you need a navy? In the later stage, all people with abilities will not conquer the earth.

The heroine is seduced and goes to a bar with another man to drink and prepares to go racing. This plot is awesome and quite green.

What you wrote is not a tomb robbing novel, but a stallion novel.

If you can't even understand the relationship between Wu Sansheng and Lian Lian, and think they are the products of the Bronze Tree, you won't be able to write the plot of Sha Hai and Ting Lei clearly.

You are really good at licking. Oh my god, author, are you used to licking in reality? You can lick like crazy in novels.

The protoss is so weak. He is obviously the main god but he is following the angels. I feel that this is not cooperation, it is vassalage. You wrote it wrong. The protoss is too weak. StarCraft does not correspond to the background of the super seminary. You can't just write it like this. After all, he is the protagonist. All so-called engines have backdoors.

Just finish it. The further you go, the worse it will be.

You already have a system and you still want to be a licker* If you don't go together, you won't be able to write, right?

Which version of Aning, Chen Mudong?

Awesome, the article says that Xu Fu brought back the jade figurines, but Qin Shihuang didn't use them, but the Tiemensheng got them. What's your chronological order??? Can I get some snacks?

The bloodline here should refer to bloodline, which is expressed through the inheritance of surnames. The bloodline of the protagonist is very complicated, and he should not be a person anymore. The name should be unique to us humans. Does the protagonist still have a name?

The Qixing Lu Palace is an ancient tomb of the Warring States Period. Why did Xu Fu bring the golden jade clothes back? It must have been a few hundred years apart. Even if you write fan fiction, you have to have a little bit of historical perspective, right?

This Ni Ma Xuanwu bloodline appeared inexplicably? ! No explanation was given as to how he appeared. . .

The names are all wrong, now it's this, now it's that, I feel dizzy looking at it

As title. . . I want it when I see a beautiful woman in the plot. . Meet one and love one. .

What the hell is Tang Dynasty blue and white porcelain?

I just couldn't find it. Isn't the Chen version of Aning and The Raging Sea and the Sands that the author mentioned Li Man's version?

When I saw the first blood, I thought the protagonist had killed Aning...

I have seen one kill Aning at the beginning. . .

The protagonist knows how to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger every day, isn't it nice to show off his true strength?

The author of the introduction can also write typos! Awesome(???_??)?

Aren't Wolverine's steel claws?

Come on, I've been saving for several days, and I've finished reading it a few times, so I'll continue to keep it up. Although I don't have any extra points to give away, but you'll see more,

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Why does it all feel like a routine, the beginning of the academy, the special female training, and other powerful anime beast-like characters that evolve into unrelated elves?

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