Traveling through parallel time and space in Tokyo, Teru Aoki decided to become a light novel copywriter and become a happy rich man.
However, after the first volume of his "Passenger Heroine" sold millions of copies, his childhood sweetheart Eri, whom he had not seen for many years, came to visit. There was a senior in the school named Kasumigaoka Shiu.
When Harmono sold two million copies, a cold-faced girl named Yukinoshita appeared.
Ying Lili: "Who is An Yilun? Aoki Teru, do you want to die ten thousand times?"
Kasumigaoka: "Haha, Hui-kun is really good at playing. He made someone the heroine without her consent, but you are the only one she likes."
Yukinoshita: "Aoki-san, when did you from the Service Club become Hikigaya?"
The light novel characters created from his writing have appeared in various identities one after another.
Easy daily writing, don't read if you don't like it
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
To be honest, Kasumigaoka Shiu's character may be very popular in anime, but in reality, if a woman with this kind of character really exists, she will definitely be beaten to death. She has a sinister belly and a vicious tongue. In reality, she is a slut (personal opinion, please don't criticize)
Do you know why your grades are poor? Come on the street as soon as possible, you lecherous thing
I still don't understand why going to the frontier to take charge of the military is a reason why I am not favored and cannot compete for the throne.
Then why write a passerby heroine? Like to wear hats and think you are a green slave?
The Slowness Fruit will not make you slow to speak after being slow.
Why tease others? How old is he? Even teenagers didn't make fun of people in their twenties or thirties? I really don't understand! And the protagonist is obviously not a mutant anymore. They are not from the same world system, so how can they be considered mutants? And the river god also wants to learn English. There are all kinds of weird and irrational things in his world! Their gods and the like are all speaking Chinese. I think what they say should be translated into their own language. How could the river god not understand what other people were saying in this world? Even animals and plants are no exception! How could the River God be so weak? Can't he do anything with river-related concepts? The long river of time and space leading to other worlds, the river of dimensions?
I almost misunderstood. It turned out to be a retelling of Bing'er's experience of being abducted by a supernatural beast in the original work.
It's so slow that it's not like Fei Lu's writing. One year has passed and nothing has happened. Comparing it to the year when there was the lion next door makes the tiger look useless. . .
The writing is okay, but there are no new books in the library, so there is no popularity.
Is the author here?
Whether the score is good or not, if not, I suggest you repost it and ask the editor how to publish the book. Otherwise, there is not a single comment after 20,000 words. I guess the flowers are my own.
Send it again.
I also want to ask about the heroine, does it have Haruko, or is it less popular without a heroine?
Seriously, when the characters and character names don't match, the book is over
It's a bit unrealistic. No matter what the mainstream is, any book will be rated a million, and you can stop writing at will, and readers will buy it.
Except for the first few chapters, I have never seen the protagonist's skills. Every time he wins, he relies on his physical fitness. Although Return to Nature is great, it's boring. Isn't it interesting that the King of Tennis has a variety of skills?
Every time a person appears, there will be infringement trouble. Doesn't the system create life every time and rewrite everyone's memory? So can't the content of the novel be rewritten? Like the [Power of Existence] in [Shakugan no Shana], replace it with something else.
I would like to make a suggestion. If you want to depict the tomb of an immortal, you can't keep making corpses and other things. They are caused by mortals, and the yin energy is too strong. Those who cultivate immortals are on the right path, not ghost cultivators who make sacrifices. They should build some miraculous buildings. The tomb of the immortals is at least an underground palace, right? , Bring some mythical animals to replace those corpse crickets.
Okamoto? Oh ho! Everyone understands
You are not even as good as Yi Xiaochuan.
Did your book go to college? Why do you want a eunuch? I really like your book. Do you want to make an eunuch?
Brother, please update it soon. It's been so long and it hasn't reached more than 100 chapters yet? Is the update a bit slow?
Wang Bao is only Ajie's subordinate, and Wang Bao is not Zhongyixin, Ah Fa and Luo Tianhong are not Wang Bao's subordinates, Lian Haolong is Zhongyixin, and Ahfa Tianhong is Lian Haolong's subordinate, okay?
Come on, three monthly votes have been cast, update soon
Commentary on Chapter 31 Cooperation Chapter "Elf: Obtaining Three King-Level Dragons at the Start" written by the God of Competition.
Time is a bit of an underworld. If you can write it and put it on the shelves, rewards are indispensable. If you update it every day, I don't ask for more free data. As long as you are not in charge, I will give it to you.
He had just won the ** season championship and O'Neal had just entered the league. Why did he beat the second youngster of the Thunder and Curry scored a three-pointer? The timeline doesn't match up?
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I'm tired of seeing the protagonists named Lin and Ye
** Coin, still effeminate, ** brains
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To be honest, Kasumigaoka Shiu's character may be very popular in anime, but in reality, if a woman with this kind of character really exists, she will definitely be beaten to death. She has a sinister belly and a vicious tongue. In reality, she is a slut (personal opinion, please don't criticize)
Do you know why your grades are poor? Come on the street as soon as possible, you lecherous thing
I still don't understand why going to the frontier to take charge of the military is a reason why I am not favored and cannot compete for the throne.
Then why write a passerby heroine? Like to wear hats and think you are a green slave?
The Slowness Fruit will not make you slow to speak after being slow.
Why tease others? How old is he? Even teenagers didn't make fun of people in their twenties or thirties? I really don't understand! And the protagonist is obviously not a mutant anymore. They are not from the same world system, so how can they be considered mutants? And the river god also wants to learn English. There are all kinds of weird and irrational things in his world! Their gods and the like are all speaking Chinese. I think what they say should be translated into their own language. How could the river god not understand what other people were saying in this world? Even animals and plants are no exception! How could the River God be so weak? Can't he do anything with river-related concepts? The long river of time and space leading to other worlds, the river of dimensions?
I almost misunderstood. It turned out to be a retelling of Bing'er's experience of being abducted by a supernatural beast in the original work.
It's so slow that it's not like Fei Lu's writing. One year has passed and nothing has happened. Comparing it to the year when there was the lion next door makes the tiger look useless. . .
The writing is okay, but there are no new books in the library, so there is no popularity. Is the author here? Whether the score is good or not, if not, I suggest you repost it and ask the editor how to publish the book. Otherwise, there is not a single comment after 20,000 words. I guess the flowers are my own. Send it again. I also want to ask about the heroine, does it have Haruko, or is it less popular without a heroine?
Seriously, when the characters and character names don't match, the book is over
It's a bit unrealistic. No matter what the mainstream is, any book will be rated a million, and you can stop writing at will, and readers will buy it.
Except for the first few chapters, I have never seen the protagonist's skills. Every time he wins, he relies on his physical fitness. Although Return to Nature is great, it's boring. Isn't it interesting that the King of Tennis has a variety of skills?
Every time a person appears, there will be infringement trouble. Doesn't the system create life every time and rewrite everyone's memory? So can't the content of the novel be rewritten? Like the [Power of Existence] in [Shakugan no Shana], replace it with something else.
I would like to make a suggestion. If you want to depict the tomb of an immortal, you can't keep making corpses and other things. They are caused by mortals, and the yin energy is too strong. Those who cultivate immortals are on the right path, not ghost cultivators who make sacrifices. They should build some miraculous buildings. The tomb of the immortals is at least an underground palace, right? , Bring some mythical animals to replace those corpse crickets.
Okamoto? Oh ho! Everyone understands
You are not even as good as Yi Xiaochuan.
Did your book go to college? Why do you want a eunuch? I really like your book. Do you want to make an eunuch?
Brother, please update it soon. It's been so long and it hasn't reached more than 100 chapters yet? Is the update a bit slow?
Wang Bao is only Ajie's subordinate, and Wang Bao is not Zhongyixin, Ah Fa and Luo Tianhong are not Wang Bao's subordinates, Lian Haolong is Zhongyixin, and Ahfa Tianhong is Lian Haolong's subordinate, okay?
Come on, three monthly votes have been cast, update soon
Commentary on Chapter 31 Cooperation Chapter "Elf: Obtaining Three King-Level Dragons at the Start" written by the God of Competition.
Time is a bit of an underworld. If you can write it and put it on the shelves, rewards are indispensable. If you update it every day, I don't ask for more free data. As long as you are not in charge, I will give it to you.
He had just won the ** season championship and O'Neal had just entered the league. Why did he beat the second youngster of the Thunder and Curry scored a three-pointer? The timeline doesn't match up?
About "Doomsday: Upgrading the Doomsday Chariot from Broken Three Wheels" written by Naruto Koto 020: Kill the men, keep the women! Chapter review.
I'm tired of seeing the protagonists named Lin and Ye
** Coin, still effeminate, ** brains
About Chapter 006 of "Elf Documentary: Catching a Mini Dragon through Popular Science at the Beginning" written by Qianjin Si. Exploring and discovering the prop rewards of wild elves! Chapter review.
"Three Kingdoms: The Poorest Counselor, Cao Cao is paralyzed!" Written by the hard-working bad guy! 0012 Above the civilian villages, there are also military villages, full of surprises! Chapter review.
"NBA: Beginning Fusion Wolverine" written by the belly man who jumped on the street Chapter 44 Wiggins' dark moment! Is he the second Xiaoka? Chapter review.
About "Three Years After Going Down the Mountain to Marry a Wife, His Purple Taoist Robe Was Discovered by His Wife" written by 8026955 Chapter 85 Xie Heng is the Emperor! Identity exposed! The whole network exploded! Chapter review.