
Kasumigaoka, That's Not How You Write a Book
霞之丘,书,不是这么写的
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 24k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
20Chapters
1.4MReads
1.2kFlowers
10.0Score
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Haha, the writing is not good at the beginning. If the level of the novel is only ten years ago, go and watch those animations. They are all adapted from the novels. It is amazing that the level of the novel is only ten years ago. What do you want to do with me? Is this the level of ten years ago?
It's not that there's anything bad about Dou Po's plot or writing, but I personally feel that Dou Po's biggest flaw is that the protagonist is a time traveler, and he was almost thirty years old before time travel, and he directly attacks underage lolita after time travel. As a person with basic moral values, this is really **, after all, Xiao Yan's real age can be Xiao Xun'er's father (this is the world before time travel).
The writing is good, but a little lacking.
The author taught me how to write novels.
Fighting spirit turns into a horse, so terrifying
Is there a wedding of five equal parts?