I Exposed Luffy to Garp in the Beginning of One Piece!

This book has been cut off, brothers. The reason for cutting it off is that there are too many people scolding me in the comment section, and I can't write anymore. And the most real and main reason is that too few people have read it. I'm sorry, brothers.

How could Garp not know about Luffy going to sea? . .

This setting overestimates the human race in Marvel and underestimates the human empire in Warhammer. It feels short-sighted. Although due to problems with the world view and human numerical values, everyone feels that the geniuses in Marvel are giants, but your setting makes people feel that the human empire has millions of planets, and its citizens numbering in the capital are too worthless, and they are completely like noobs.

By the way, if you repost it, it shouldn't take so long, right? Unless something needs to be changed.

The pace should be faster, Nezha's identity should be revealed earlier. Now it's finally time to write about ancient mythology. Now no one knows anyone. What the hell? ? ? ?

As mentioned earlier, the protagonist is a straight man, but he changed hands and sent songs to him when they met again. Author, you are not a straight man, why don't you just write the protagonist without any brains? Too licking*, maybe you understand that straight men just have no idea to give things to beautiful women when they see them. As long as you can speak, it is worth it to go bankrupt. Don't say you don't know the value of a good song. You don't know about Huawei's purchase of songs that was so hot in the news a few months ago, right? I really hope to meet the kind of protagonist you describe in society. I don't know how much money I can make just by giving two pretty girls as escorts. Is it so difficult to have some brains when writing about an urban novel, not about a boy who gives money? This book is really poisonous, comparable to those pretentious chapters.

Aren't prehistoric times generally unable to transcend time and space?

In fact, we can also bring Weiwei on board. It doesn't matter whether she is strong or not. The main thing is that she can dance well and has a bit of a sexy dance feel.

Veteran driver, robot war can still be played like this.

Did you steal the Jinjin Fruit from Brother Ming? Did you take a good look?

I don't understand why pirates are written about it. Many people like to get devil fruits. How much energy does the protagonist have to develop them? Vomited

It's very well written. I see that many authors nowadays write otherworld novels under the guise of pirate fan fiction. It doesn't feel like they're immersive at all. I just like to read pirate fan fiction, preferably with the original plot.

Kaido's silly son Yamato is actually a girl

What a joke. There is a competitive relationship between pirates and pirates. The navy that cooperates with pirates should be laughed at more.

Those who should be killed should find reasons not to kill them, and those who shouldn't should be killed should look to history to kill them. It won't be long before they become eunuchs.

Don't know! The protagonist has repeatedly emphasized that he must carry on with Luffy's efforts? What? Luffy went to heaven? ! Interesting?

It's really fast to follow the trend. There were 100,000 dead soldiers before, and now there are 3,000 more

The author also has low emotional intelligence. He copied Jay's songs and gave them to Jay. He also taught others from the perspective of a senior, why are you so big-faced? Hua Chengyu, what kind of person can be on the same music program as Jay Chou? There are also earth travelers who copy songs and then don't recognize Yang Mi and haven't even heard her name?

I've been constantly flooded with sparks lately, and it's really uncomfortable with the gray track. After reading this novel, I just want to say: What does Howard with double arm guards mean?

Come and tell me how many kilometers equals 600,000 meters? How many kilometers? Either measure directly in kilometers or kilometers, there is no need to do this to make up the word count.

Can players watch players? Why are there players watching the male protagonist?

Author, I read your article and I got a bit confused. What should I do?

Well written, I read it in one sitting

As someone who specializes in hospitals, you also need to add Douyin. **How ​​much did Douyin give you? You've all watched too much Douyin, have you watched it?

The book is a good book, but the author is not a human being.

I think Yang Miaozhen can appear.

I don't understand what you are writing at all.

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