Xuanhuan: I Summoned a Hundred Thousand Immortal Herbs

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After reading Chapter 7, I didn't want to read Fei Lu. Is there such a book??? Hang up??? Isn't this just an ordinary traditional novel?

I thought it was the Hundred Thousand Burning Immortal*

I have read all the updated chapters and found that there is a very serious problem. The characters in the novel are all superficial and appear only for the development of the plot. There is no outstanding personality and the description of the characters is not delicate enough. There is a lot of lack of focus on the protagonist. I wonder if other readers have the same feeling. Often while reading I don't know who the protagonist is. Generally speaking, the good novels written by Fei Lu are all portrayed around the protagonist. Especially in the chapter about the sect rules, the whole chapter is devoted to describing the sect rules. The entire chapter is filled with dialogues and introductions to the sect rules, and there is no description of the inner activities of the protagonist at all. For example, how harsh does the protagonist think it is, what aspects are unreasonable, and what aspects are good or bad for him. For example, in the chapter about attracting spirits into the body, it is written that after the protagonist swallowed the effect of the elixir, he left the protagonist out of the matter and began to focus on describing others. After all, the author of this book

It's well written. I'll come and read it often.

Write it in big letters quickly, I can't read it

Generally speaking, the writing style is okay, but some connections are not clearly explained, making it a bit confusing when I read it! Also, the character construction is not complete enough, and there is no way to let everyone know the protagonist's personality and preferences from the existing text... Personality is mostly expressed through words and actions. The initial nervousness or panic of a person who knows nothing about his or her surroundings should be reflected in some details, and then the gradual trust or dependence after getting along with the person. But these are all after making sure that the other person will not hurt you. In short, it requires a process... So what... I haven't read much, only the first few chapters... So the questions I answer will definitely be single and one-sided~~ Please bear with me! Please support the author

After reading the introduction and the beginning, I thought it was because the aptitudes were not good enough and I relied on treasures to speed up the growth of elixirs and use resources to defeat the realm. But as I read on, I didn't expect that the treasures actually improved the top-level aptitudes. Quite unexpected

I don't believe Zhang Fan can become an immortal

Very well written, please update soon