I Stole the Heavenly Gold from the Start

. . . It's no problem to take Nami with me. . . But why do you want to blackmail Luffy? Is Luffy such a person? I like Luffy so much. It doesn't matter if I beat him or kill him. But if he has a bad character, it's boring.

Personally, I think the biggest drawback of this book is that Luffy seems to have turned dark? Are you kidding me? Luffy didn't turn dark even after Ace died, but he turned dark just because Nami left? The reason is that I'm drunk. I just want Luffy to fight against the protagonist, and then it will be good?

The author is so awesome. The main character Luffy is a sunny person, but suddenly he becomes gloomy? Is this blackening? But that's not it. Didn't Usopp also say he was leaving the 4 Pirates? He didn't even care about Luffy. Now, Nami is leaving like this? Facing Xiong and General Kizaru, he said he would run away if he could, but now he actually wants to fight at all costs? This change in personality is too big. Even if Luffy is a troublemaker, he will meet people he can't afford to mess with wherever he goes. Then the protagonist's halo breaks out and defeats the opponent, but this is also the author's usual routine. Whether it's a pirate, a Hokage, or a Shinigami, it's the same routine. But it's undeniable that the character doesn't just change, especially the protagonist's. You can make it motivated to become stronger, but it won't be so dark!!! And even if it develops to the time when Luffy fights Kaido, he is at most a general level, not even as good as Aokiji two years ago. How much stronger is Akainu, and how much of a threat can he pose to the protagonist? If the dragon is said to be very strong, I still believe it. After all, it hasn't been shown in detail, so it's hard to say!

Fei Lu can cancel likes, it's comfortable

After seeing you hacking Luffy, I can dodge. After all, who Luffy is, anyone who has watched One Piece will understand. His character design is completely gone.

After the old man Yamamoto unlocked his swastika, the temperature of the flames was as high as the core of the sun. Only Aizen could hang him up and hammer him. Yamamoto alone could hang up all the pirates and hammer him, turning the One Piece into the Bandit King. Every time I read this kind of novel, my strength is weakened to my younger brother.

I want to complain after reading the first one. There is only a reward of 10 million to rob the sky gold. Can the author not let the hidden setting of the anime follow your book? The sky gold represents the face of the Celestial Dragon. You need to start with 100 million to rob the sky gold. Even if you are just an ordinary person.

Kill the protagonist Wang Lufei. He is just a troublemaker. He has no strength and cheats his teammates all day long.

The data corruption of yours is too serious. It can cost you trillions. Think about it. The bounty offered by the Four Emperors is only a few billions.

You put too much thought into writing Luffy, he is definitely not such a person. Have you really watched One Piece? Can you please stop writing everyone differently?