God of Cuisine

Otherwise, it would be too uncomfortable to watch.

I don't think it's necessary to live with the main character in Jixing Ryo, because most of them live there and they're used to it. It's very novel to write about people who live in other places. I've only read two books about living in other places so far.

It's well written, but why does it look so awkward? I can't tell you how uncomfortable it is.

One suggestion is not to put the protagonist's name and other people's names first, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch. You don't need to keep mentioning the protagonist's name, everyone should know who said it.

It's okay to go to Sobu High School to attend the second grade of junior high school.

Elementary school student? It's so uncomfortable to read without any punctuation marks.

I don't understand why you dragged Nino into Totsuki forcefully.

The script is okay, but some of the expressions I wish could be smoothed out, they are too naive.

Isn't Bai An like pasta? Shouldn't God's touch be the hand?

It's so uncomfortable, it looks so weird without the quotation marks!