Summoning: Starting with a Casket Carried by Black Men

A newbie on the street, asking for help online, waiting for comments, and crowdfunding to write a book.

1. I suggest that the protagonist should stop saying "Whoever wants to hurt his sister must step over his body". First, he says it too much, and he says it in front of his sister, and every time he says it, he can't deal with the enemy quickly, which makes me almost sick with embarrassment. 2. I feel that the protagonist's mentality is very immature. On the one hand, because of someone else's words, he suspected that the teacher was Long Yang, so he threw the welfare skills given to him on the ground and said he didn't want it; second, the protagonist obviously had such a miserable life in the past, and should pursue more power in mentality, but every time he draws a card, he is very powerful, but he looks disgusted, which does not match the protagonist's life background; The third is two consecutive descriptions, where the enemy is in front of you. You don't use the powerful cards you already have. Instead, you spend all your energy to draw new cards, gamble on luck, and throw them at the enemy without even looking at them. You are not afraid that the drawn cards will be unusable. By then, you won't even have time to react... This kind of writing is really not fun, and it is easily offensive.

A piece of advice from old bookworms to little bookworms, it's a good habit to read book reviews before reading. Reminder: This book is about abuse. Those black people carrying the coffin and the old man were all forced into it. It is not funny at all. If you want to read a happy story, you can turn it off. (When you see the likes, give me a thumbs up, don't let the little bookworms be poisoned by this book)

The main character Niang marries a human being, it's so poisonous, I've been poisoned to death

This is definitely the best novel I have read in Feilu in the past few years. The writing style is unique, the logic is clear, the plot is touching, and the main and supporting characters have online IQs. I have watched it eight times, and I have new feelings every time and shed tears every time. Fifty cents a piece

If you brutally torture the heroine at the beginning, so what if you feel better in the future? The poison is the poison! I hate the kind of novels that use the abuse of the heroine as a foreshadowing!!!

Wouldn't his sister become a strong person herself and protect her brother for the rest of her life? As a result, all my qualifications were lost. He even sells himself to really abuse the heroine. . Poisoned to death

Only people with mental illness should read this kind of book

But why am I almost laughing when I see it?

Not only is the protagonist a fool, the protagonist's sister is also a fool