Calling: It Starts with Black People Carrying the Coffin

1. I suggest that the protagonist should stop saying "Whoever wants to hurt his sister must step over his body". First, he says it too much, and he says it in front of his sister, and every time he says it, he can't deal with the enemy quickly, which makes me almost sick with embarrassment. 2. I feel that the protagonist's mentality is very immature. On the one hand, because of someone else's words, he suspected that the teacher was Long Yang, so he threw the welfare skills given to him on the ground and said he didn't want it; second, the protagonist obviously had such a miserable life in the past, and should pursue more power in mentality, but every time he draws a card, he is very powerful, but he looks disgusted, which does not match the protagonist's life background; The third is two consecutive descriptions, where the enemy is in front of you. You don't use the powerful cards you already have. Instead, you spend all your energy to draw new cards, gamble on luck, and throw them at the enemy without even looking at them. You are not afraid that the drawn cards will be unusable. By then, you won't even have time to react... This kind of writing is really not fun, and it is easily offensive.

This is definitely the best novel I have read in Feilu in the past few years. The writing style is unique, the logic is clear, the plot is touching, and the main and supporting characters have online IQs. I have watched it eight times, and I have new feelings every time and shed tears every time. Fifty cents a piece

Funny is really funny, poison is really poisonous

It's still poisonous after five chapters. . . The author asked us to hold on, hold on so hard that we almost burst into tears. . .

Do you have Holm Syndrome?

Don't read this book, it's too poisonous

Are you writing nima? I haven't read half of the first chapter. I'm crazy, do you know what you're writing? That's a piece of shit

These days, there are still people reading books about abuse of masters. I was so poisoned that I died from the poison. It's like a non-author. Now that I have a keyboard, I can write any book, right?

It is said that everything is poisonous after chapter 5. But I was hooked in the first chapter. It was so stupid to use such a trick that makes me fucked at first sight.