Red Mansion: the First Sage Through the Ages

It's a mindless pretense and a slap in the face. One second the protagonist was composing an eternal quatrain in front of everyone in the Jia family, and the next second they were laughing at the protagonist for not being able to write good poetry.

If you read this book less than once, you probably won't live long.

I don't understand either. Is the male protagonist mentally retarded? I fight with this bunch of girls all day long, and the tmd heroine doesn't accept any of them. I really don't understand what the author is writing. This is too cliché. What a waste of my money. The more I watch it, the more I get upset. The more I watch it, the more I get upset. The male protagonist is written like a woman. You can directly change the title of this book to Brothel. So many beauties appear, but you don't accept any of them. They keep showing up and you don't accept them. Why are you writing so many beauties? Are you sick? It is better to write an article about pure love. I want to write about the harem, but I don't want to accept it. I have read almost 200 chapters now, and you fucking heroine only has a few of your maids. Are you taking those many beauties to eat? Or what happened? You keep flirting with beautiful women when they are with you. You keep flirting with them and you keep flirting with them. I don't even understand what the meaning of your existence is when you write about them?

The plot and rhythm are a bit abrupt. As a summoner, there is no direct control over the summoned objects. Secondly, for modern people summoned, there is no deeper description, such as some Lian Jia Zi's Kung Fu. Note that it is just like the kung fu in Hong Kong movies, more common like Wong Fei Hung, Ip Man, Bruce Lee, etc. Occasionally, the player can recover the whole body or cleanse the marrow, and then lead the plot. Look at the modern upper class, with a little bit of foreign jealousy after the country becomes stronger, this will be enough for you to write dozens of chapters. There is still a bit of contention to write, and one's own mastery of power beyond the times, but don't write about alien technology. Secondly, develop into Xianqin. The protagonist is the leader, not the leader. The last point is to cut and rewrite. The previous plot of this book is too uncomfortable and difficult to follow.

The brothers are not ranked together in the same generation, or where did the Second Master Bao and the Second Master Lian come from? Fourth Master Jia Mu, after all, has a super-class imperial decree. Even the prince's son can't be unreasonable.

No matter how much you try to evade it, you can't evade the culture of the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods! They are all philosophies of life. A little too much.

They talk about beautiful women at every turn, and some even go to great lengths to describe them. In the end, some of them are fine if they are accepted, but those who are not accepted or killed are really speechless. If you are not interested in accepting them or want to kill them, you don't need to go out of your way to describe their beauty. Le

Will Ye Hei Xiaoyan and the protagonists from the comedy show not return?

The modified damage is really poisonous

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