
Da Qin: a Thunderous Fruit at the Beginning
大秦:开局一颗响雷果实
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 17k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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11Chapters
1.6MReads
6.5kFlowers
10.0Score
100Rewards
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It gives me the feeling that the author is forcing the writing to be very exciting, and has prepared the team members as sand coins. I know what kind of bond you want to show, and the feeling of explosiveness, but you have not grasped the degree of the previous foreshadowing, so it is very uncomfortable to watch.