
Destroy the Light with the First Shot at the Beginning
开局一发破坏光线
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- Completed
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- 617k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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Every time I see someone talking about turning the Master into a warrior, I feel like **, how many times did the light fail in the plot of Tiga? Didn't you watch it? When was it not a powerful type that forced the monster to freeze and then harvested it with light? Now he actually goes against Tiangang and teases about the right way. This is just like the second-generation version of the beast Duanmu, which makes people feel ****. The fake king is still overpowering the real master.
I'm very curious, if you take Sina in, Naruto will be gone. Asura chakra follows Sina's child, and then the protagonist's son is Naruto? Then how to write it, every time I see Hina taking over, I feel very poisonous. Naruto is Asura, and Asura only follows Uzumaki and Senju people, that is, Asura follows Hina, because these reincarnated chakras have very high blood requirements. Sasuke doesn't know if it is because of his father or mother, but Naruto must be because of Hina, so why should the protagonist be Naruto's father? Or let Minato and Tsunade give birth to a Naruto?
These days, the useless start is outdated.
It made me laugh. There are typos in the introduction. You can imagine the quality. How did you type the word "Zhongzhi"? Hahahahaha
After reading the comments, it means that the protagonist tore apart Shinai and Minato, and then he didn't want them anymore, so he just threw them away? Is that what you mean?
Will the author write Honkai Academy 2?
The protagonist is attacked every day and still doesn't fight back. Tsk, the real ** who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger is still so aggrieved after reading a novel.
I suggest the author not to accept Shinna's character. Men like to slap women in the face. If you accept her, readers will think that the protagonist is a licker. And you also said that most women are single-minded, and it is impossible to empathize and not fall in love with the protagonist just because of guilt and curiosity about the protagonist.
Doesn't your system even give you a novice gift pack? This protagonist has basically nothing but momentum now! You have to have a cool place to resonate and everyone will read it. Then won't the data start to rise? Don't always think about suppressing long-term writing, otherwise you may not be able to write until later!
I am a fictional historian, and this is history-making;
At first glance, the author is from Japan*
Why do I think it's better to be a humanoid Pokémon?
I would like to give you a suggestion. You can unlock the technical data of enhanced items by yourself. Can you produce them by yourself? For example, with robots, wouldn't it be easy to have Xiao Ling? Tianwang people are also doing their own research and development, upgrading and upgrading.
To be honest, the plot was okay. The only failure was the relationship scene with Shinai, and it was a complete failure. It's hard to say how the performance would have been without this relationship scene, but it would definitely be higher than it is now. You said you want to accept Sina, there are many scenes, but it doesn't look like you want to accept it. If you don't accept it, it has already been demolished and then just throw it away? The author does not give an affirmation, and has been trying to attract the readers' appetite. If the author sees it, just give an answer directly, and just say one sentence whether he accepts it or not.
Wang Xiaomeng Bi Changban, Wang Xiangxiu, Chen Yannan, Yang Xiaoyan, Li Qiuge, Xie Xiaomei, Sha Niu, Hua Mei, Xiao Chuchu, He Lan, Su Mang, Tang Guoguo, Shi Yi, Hu Yifei, Chen Meijia, Lin Wanyu, Qin Yumo, Tang Youyou, Zhuge Dali, Zhuge Dasheng, Nuo Lan, Lisa, Xin Ling, Xiao Yu Xixi
I haven't watched it yet and wanted to ask if there is a female protagonist. I prefer Zhao Jinmai.
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