Ding! Sign-in successful. Acquired the innate Sword Bone physique, Sword Dao comprehension +150!
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After transmigrating to the world of The Storm Riders and becoming the great villain Duan Lang, he vows that this time he won't suffer the tragic fate he did in the original story. He'll turn the world upside down and rule it as he pleases!
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to real people or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
The first chapter is toxic. Can you respect some of the original works when writing a fanfic? Duanlang's qualifications are not ordinary. You must know that he can beat Bu Jingyun in the competition to choose the hall leader without any resources? Who is Bu Jingyun? Protagonist + Xiong Ba's apprentice! Can his qualifications be average?
If Duanlang's qualifications were ordinary, then Bu Jingyun would not be as good as him.
Duan Lang's qualifications are no worse than Nie Feng's, and he may even surpass Feng Yun. Do you remember where he chose the hall leader? Fengyun is the best at practicing Fengshen Leg Paiyun Palm and their respective family martial arts resources, because they are Xiong Ba's apprentices, Duan Lang is just a handyman, and they only practice family martial arts. Without resources, they can defeat Bu Jingyun. If Xiong Ba hadn't secretly made a move, Bu Jingyun would have been defeated. Do you think his qualifications are good?
Emperor Shitian spent his whole life wandering and met Duanlang (funny)
I wanted to laugh when I saw Duanlang's average talent. If you haven't read it, don't write a fanfic,**
The issue of qualifications was mentioned in the first chapter, but it has nothing to do with qualifications later on. Why do you need qualifications if you can't practice? The systematic Duan Lang can't even compare to Duan Lang in the original work. Duan Lang's martial arts surpassed Bu Jingyun in the original work. During the competition in the original work, Duan Lang's martial arts is not as good as the original work. The original Duan Lang was written down by the author.
Isn't the Duan family's mental skills internal strength? Three-point return of vitality cannot cultivate internal strength. You have learned so many martial arts skills that it is of no use. It is too weak. In the first few months, I reached the second-rate level, and then it took ten years to reach the mid-level first-rate level. What a fool you are! He also started saying that one day of practice is equal to one year for others, and you can perfect the swordsmanship that a genius learned in three months in one hour. Do you know what this means? A cultivation speed that is a hundred times faster than that of ordinary geniuses. After ten years, it is at least innate, right?
If I remember correctly, Duanlang's family swordsmanship is called Sun Eclipse Swordsmanship.
If you add Emiya's sword bones and lines and skills, it would be awesome.
The innate bitch makes me vomit from looking at it