Jiang Chen was about to open the dormitory door when he realized that the door in front of him was very different from the one in the dormitory.
Um?
"I'm going through time now...?"
"What? It's actually the two-dimensional everyday world?"
"... As for the daily routine, what the hell are these?"
"Go away... I'm still a child!"
This book also tells me that it is impossible for my system to become a great sage, no matter how to avoid the Shura field correctly. .
No stallion, no gift girl, no holy mother
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
Damn it, is this what you said about not giving away your daughter? ? ? ? ? Tuanzi is so cute. You gave it to Otoshi like this. Although you like Oteacher, the world view is different. In this fan fiction, he is only a supporting role, not the protagonist. Even if you like Oteacher as much as we do, you won't make it so obvious and just give it to Oteacher. Send a girl, you write like this, how can we appear superior and have a sense of existence in front of the great teacher? What you write is for yourself, not for the public, time traveler, send a girl, how much do you dislike dumplings, *, a kind of plant, decisive**
Breaking the law, even if he is a drug lord, he is still a human being. Since they are human beings, they must be handed over to the law. If you kill him privately, it's certainly against the law.
You can sell these life-extending medicines to anyone, but you can't sell them to Li Ka-shing. I suggest this guy die early.
The protagonist will not be killed for all kinds of provocations to the emperor. Hey, no matter how rampant the original work is, I will not kill him. I will just let them scold me. This kind of **** book can still be written. You readers are too tolerant.
Will it be completed in March next year? Haha, the day this book is completed will be when you return to the west. Leave an address and I will go to your house for dinner.
Cocolia can predict the arrival of the unknown guest beforehand, and can even be wanted two days in advance. Where did you get the plot and setting?
Do you like joining the ministry so much? I find that most novels with sexual objects like to write about this? Are all the protagonists this kind of mindless?
The protagonist went to accept a disciple, and he just finished saying "please ask the immortal to accept me as a disciple"
The protagonist then said, "You are willing to worship me as your teacher."
Can I read a book written by someone with this IQ? I don't know how evil it will be later, but where is my heart?
What are you writing? Chapter 39 is such a big surprise. Do you think the results are too good?
In the first chapter, the protagonist's revenge on the villagers was quite exciting, but the result was anticlimactic, as if he had watched half an episode of Boruto. Then he started to have a harem, and his revenge on the villagers was almost non-existent. The passion that was finally ignited was poured out.
When did Diarmuid become a child of light?
There are really no two people who can read this kind of book. The greater the hope, the greater the disappointment.
In the wilderness, six-eared macaques.
He was born after the Great Tribulation of Longhan and before Taoist Hongjun preached.
Because the six-eared macaque uses its innate supernatural powers to perform tricks,
Eavesdropping on the sermon of Taoist Hongjun. ? As a saying goes, "The law cannot be transmitted to the six ears."
As a six-eared macaque, no one dared to accept him as his disciple. Teach Taoism.
By the way, it's a new year, and Xiaoba, you haven't finished your book yet! You should be able to finish writing it by 2024, right? Hahahahaha
It's a bit awkward, and I'm second in class.
Author, are you saying this a bit too far from reality? I've already stripped off all my clothes, and I'm not even going to go up, Liu Xiahui.
The protagonist was a waste when he was born, and he is even more waste when he has a system, and the author is also an old cripple**
Although the system cannot make you invincible at the start, without the system you would be worse than a waste.
So much has been written about the heroine, but she doesn't appear many times, and Yukinoshita won't appear again.
To be honest, at the beginning I thought it was an angel campus pretense, and I went to other worlds from time to time to destroy it with holy light. Later I found out that it was a straight male Shura field forcibly written. The most poisonous thing is that he actually made a statement in front of a female protagonist that he wanted to return to the country?
And I didn't write much about your power later on, it was just about daily uncomfortable writing!
Just like the book, the main character is forced to be a straight man, and the Shura field is forced to be written. If you want to order all of them, you should consider it.
The other things are not important. It is about Chuunibyou. I just want to know if this book will also pull Rikka back from the Chuunibyou world regardless of the same? I have read many comics, and as long as they are about chuunibyou, everyone wants to bring Rikka back to reality, but I have never seen anyone directly create a virtual world for Kotori Yurikka, and accompany Kotori Yurikka to go crazy together. Speaking of which, I have never seen anyone really like Rikka and tolerate her willfulness.
Authors who disappoint their readers.
I think many of the chapters you wrote are a bit too white. I suggest the author take a look at those novels that others say are poorly written. After all, other people's writing is poor, but some people read it, and many people still read it. This is also a skill, and you can learn from it. If the writing is too white like now, the novel will appear to be a bit too empty. You can still read it at the beginning, but it will not work if it continues like this all the time. It will not retain people.
The order of priority in the novel is very clear, which is good. Mainly extraordinary, supplemented by machinations. Hit it when it's time to hit it, and don't delay. In this aspect alone, you surpass many authors. So far, I think the only flaw is the emergence of a modern army organization. If this is the case, it can be changed later, for example, it can be changed to a legion system. Then the author, you let the Targaryen family be in charge of the dragon army, but the Targaryen family is a remnant of the previous dynasty after all. Can you rest assured about this? Why not train a group of people who can control flying dragons? It feels safe to use it this way.
Come on, author, I will support you as long as you are still updating.
How many days have you been writing or not? Not updated yet?
The writing in this book is so boring. For example, when I wrote the move "Wind God Kick", there wasn't even a specific call for it! Not to mention other problems.
I personally think this book is quite good and quite funny. I hope the author will continue to write more books.
It's okay if you don't give him a girl. Isn't it cool if the heroine wants to use him? Just don't give him a girl.
Beauty? Like beautiful women? There are no beauties in reality, so you want to harm those beauties in the second dimension. Are you a pervert? Or are you sick?
Damn it, is this what you said about not giving away your daughter? ? ? ? ? Tuanzi is so cute. You gave it to Otoshi like this. Although you like Oteacher, the world view is different. In this fan fiction, he is only a supporting role, not the protagonist. Even if you like Oteacher as much as we do, you won't make it so obvious and just give it to Oteacher. Send a girl, you write like this, how can we appear superior and have a sense of existence in front of the great teacher? What you write is for yourself, not for the public, time traveler, send a girl, how much do you dislike dumplings, *, a kind of plant, decisive**
Breaking the law, even if he is a drug lord, he is still a human being. Since they are human beings, they must be handed over to the law. If you kill him privately, it's certainly against the law.
You can sell these life-extending medicines to anyone, but you can't sell them to Li Ka-shing. I suggest this guy die early.
The protagonist will not be killed for all kinds of provocations to the emperor. Hey, no matter how rampant the original work is, I will not kill him. I will just let them scold me. This kind of **** book can still be written. You readers are too tolerant.
Will it be completed in March next year? Haha, the day this book is completed will be when you return to the west. Leave an address and I will go to your house for dinner.
Cocolia can predict the arrival of the unknown guest beforehand, and can even be wanted two days in advance. Where did you get the plot and setting?
Do you like joining the ministry so much? I find that most novels with sexual objects like to write about this? Are all the protagonists this kind of mindless?
The protagonist went to accept a disciple, and he just finished saying "please ask the immortal to accept me as a disciple" The protagonist then said, "You are willing to worship me as your teacher." Can I read a book written by someone with this IQ? I don't know how evil it will be later, but where is my heart?
What are you writing? Chapter 39 is such a big surprise. Do you think the results are too good?
In the first chapter, the protagonist's revenge on the villagers was quite exciting, but the result was anticlimactic, as if he had watched half an episode of Boruto. Then he started to have a harem, and his revenge on the villagers was almost non-existent. The passion that was finally ignited was poured out.
When did Diarmuid become a child of light?
There are really no two people who can read this kind of book. The greater the hope, the greater the disappointment.
In the wilderness, six-eared macaques. He was born after the Great Tribulation of Longhan and before Taoist Hongjun preached. Because the six-eared macaque uses its innate supernatural powers to perform tricks, Eavesdropping on the sermon of Taoist Hongjun. ? As a saying goes, "The law cannot be transmitted to the six ears." As a six-eared macaque, no one dared to accept him as his disciple. Teach Taoism.
By the way, it's a new year, and Xiaoba, you haven't finished your book yet! You should be able to finish writing it by 2024, right? Hahahahaha
It's a bit awkward, and I'm second in class.
Author, are you saying this a bit too far from reality? I've already stripped off all my clothes, and I'm not even going to go up, Liu Xiahui.
The protagonist was a waste when he was born, and he is even more waste when he has a system, and the author is also an old cripple**
Although the system cannot make you invincible at the start, without the system you would be worse than a waste.
So much has been written about the heroine, but she doesn't appear many times, and Yukinoshita won't appear again.
To be honest, at the beginning I thought it was an angel campus pretense, and I went to other worlds from time to time to destroy it with holy light. Later I found out that it was a straight male Shura field forcibly written. The most poisonous thing is that he actually made a statement in front of a female protagonist that he wanted to return to the country? And I didn't write much about your power later on, it was just about daily uncomfortable writing! Just like the book, the main character is forced to be a straight man, and the Shura field is forced to be written. If you want to order all of them, you should consider it.
The other things are not important. It is about Chuunibyou. I just want to know if this book will also pull Rikka back from the Chuunibyou world regardless of the same? I have read many comics, and as long as they are about chuunibyou, everyone wants to bring Rikka back to reality, but I have never seen anyone directly create a virtual world for Kotori Yurikka, and accompany Kotori Yurikka to go crazy together. Speaking of which, I have never seen anyone really like Rikka and tolerate her willfulness.
Authors who disappoint their readers.
I think many of the chapters you wrote are a bit too white. I suggest the author take a look at those novels that others say are poorly written. After all, other people's writing is poor, but some people read it, and many people still read it. This is also a skill, and you can learn from it. If the writing is too white like now, the novel will appear to be a bit too empty. You can still read it at the beginning, but it will not work if it continues like this all the time. It will not retain people.
The order of priority in the novel is very clear, which is good. Mainly extraordinary, supplemented by machinations. Hit it when it's time to hit it, and don't delay. In this aspect alone, you surpass many authors. So far, I think the only flaw is the emergence of a modern army organization. If this is the case, it can be changed later, for example, it can be changed to a legion system. Then the author, you let the Targaryen family be in charge of the dragon army, but the Targaryen family is a remnant of the previous dynasty after all. Can you rest assured about this? Why not train a group of people who can control flying dragons? It feels safe to use it this way.
Come on, author, I will support you as long as you are still updating.
How many days have you been writing or not? Not updated yet?
The writing in this book is so boring. For example, when I wrote the move "Wind God Kick", there wasn't even a specific call for it! Not to mention other problems.
I personally think this book is quite good and quite funny. I hope the author will continue to write more books.
It's okay if you don't give him a girl. Isn't it cool if the heroine wants to use him? Just don't give him a girl.
Beauty? Like beautiful women? There are no beauties in reality, so you want to harm those beauties in the second dimension. Are you a pervert? Or are you sick?