Dimensional Conquest Starting from Konoha

The first chapter was boring, and there was no sense of immersion. The Nangong Fu surname was too inconsistent. Isn't it good to have the surname Gong? In the Japanese comic world, if you choose a Chinese name, are you a naming genius?

Well, the first world war should be Madara's era, the second time was when the second generation died, and the third time was when Tsunade was a young man, so the time is a little blurred. The fourth time was to defeat Bai Zetsu's army.

When writing a novel, you first need to let others know who said this sentence and in what tone it was said. Sometimes it's best to express your thoughts in your tone of voice. Then don't be too restrictive. For example, the protagonist is very awesome, but his master Qi Tiezui refuses to let the protagonist tell his fortune just by saying a few words? Then can I understand that being Qi Tiezui is more powerful than the protagonist? Then why didn't the master let him count? When you write a novel, you must be clear and organized, and you cannot make up some incomprehensible things. Your thoughts may be clear in your mind, but your perspective is different from that of the audience. Then when writing a novel, you can be very tortuous about each thing, but you must follow it up. You cannot write a paragraph here and then another paragraph about another thing. Of course, two stories can be carried out at the same time, but they cannot be complicated. To be honest, when I was reading your book, I felt it was very complicated and messy. If you want to make progress, you can take some time to read what others have written.

Minato was around 20 years old when he was Hokage, Naruto was more than 10 years old and Tsunade was over 50 years old. Tsunade was at least 20 years older than Minato. The time didn't match up at all.

Please show your stars and see how many stars there are more than me, so that I can worship you.