A Well Is Mutated at the Beginning

As soon as the protagonist is born, his parents must die first. My talents are astounding from ancient times to the present, and I can do everything. There was a fiancée who came to break off the engagement. The protagonist is unconvinced and bullies the young man into being poor. If you go out to study art, you will definitely have the opportunity. There must be a story about becoming a disciple of someone so-and-so. He was jealous of others, and none of his senior brothers accepted it. The protagonist is slapped in the face, and the senior sister comes to help. Advise him to be patient for a while, and a chance will come. As magical weapons and magical skills come, so must the magical beasts. Once the magical skill is mastered, the enemy will appear. The two of them are like fire and water, and someone must come to persuade them. The sect held a grand competition and got the top three in revenge. The master invites me to meet you and go out to travel around the world. There are beauties in the world, and beauties have troubles. The protagonist comes to help and the trouble is solved. Then she told her origin, she must be a daughter of aristocratic family. The family then arrives and the beauty must leave. The protagonist wants to find her, but the power gap is too great. The auction house will definitely gain something later. Then find your teammates, who are beautiful women. When you leave the city and change the map, you can get air every second. The beauty has been found, and the head of the family comes to test her. There is a strong enemy in the test. That's basically the case.

I can't hold on anymore. Author, are you afraid of writing about women? Are you afraid of being criticized by those who have single female protagonists or who don't want a harem? I have been following you for a few books, but now you are afraid of this and that. Alas! I'm so disappointed, author. Let me tell you, if you don't change, one of your most loyal fans will leave you. The most exciting place to set up the emotional drama should be from thirty to more than one hundred and seventy chapters. This will make people feel less sudden. Author, do you know why so many people criticize the brainless harem? There is no foreshadowing at all, and then suddenly a group of people suddenly fall in love with the protagonist. A real harem should be one or a few who gradually fall in love with the protagonist after dozens of chapters in the early stage, and the beginning must be exciting and sweet. Isn't it too late to start from a hundred or dozens of chapters? Even if it is slow to gain popularity, it must be exciting enough in the early stage to attract people to watch, and then it will slow down! If the first part is not exciting enough, it will not retain readers. No matter how exciting the later part is, it is of no use. The most exciting part of a book is the first one million words.

After reading more than ten chapters, the writing felt like death. One day, I was arrogant, arrogant, and couldn't leave my mouth. I almost did the same to my own woman. Hehe, he was still a time traveler.

As title I didn't say anything in the previous chapter 84, but starting from chapter 85, he suddenly became the commander of the undead, and then he had an adjutant under his subordinates, which became StarCraft. I haven't read the rest of it yet. Maybe you changed the copy again, but your copy of League of Legends Shurima in chapter 84 was about to start a war, and then it disappeared? Is there too much missing in the middle?

Don't watch it with your brain, otherwise you will lose your IQ. It was obviously repaired by the protagonist, and besides, after investigation, couldn't they find out that the protagonist broadcast it online, and couldn't find out that it was sent by the protagonist? Although it is not being repaired while the broadcast is on, there are addresses for sending things to and from, but I always deny them blindly. I am also drunk.

I thought the heroine was Keiko Kato, but I didn't expect that she would turn into a murderer after a while. It was too much.

After reading a few chapters, the author has a serious lack of common sense. The large yellow croaker is 11,000 pounds, and the 11-pound large yellow croaker is equal to 110,000. Yes, there is nothing wrong with it. For example, one or two abalones are equal to one yuan, and one pound of abalone is equal to ten dollars. If I catch an abalone that weighs five pounds, and I sell it, I can buy fifty yuan. Yes, there is nothing wrong with it.

Everyone is so hypocritical, how noble do you really think they are? What would you do if you had a lot of money? Is it possible to be so "noble"? I'm afraid he's not better than the male protagonist in the novel. Is it possible to talk about feelings? Just ask how many people today are really with the one they like. Or do you pretend to be blbl and then go to lu after you finish talking? Men, if they have money, they want power, and if they have power, they want women. This has been handed down from ancient times. If you really want to watch the singles, why don't you go to a female channel?

I have read more than 200 chapters now. There is not a single female protagonist, but there are many girls around? ? ? ? If you don't accept it, why are you writing about so many girls? ? Monk Wen, identification completed! ! If you want to open a harem, just close it. Otherwise, if you come to Feilu and write a piece of shit, you can go out and learn about the scum.

1. Huo Lanwei; 2. Eunuch; 3. Ghostwriter

I've read over a hundred chapters. Where's the heroine?

Brother, the dragon meat in the sky refers to pheasant

Judging from your writing style in the first chapter... Just back off.

If you want to raise bugs, I recommend raising worms.

Name a golden eagle, Lord of Space? ? ? Don't you think it's strange that you usually call him? What a genius at naming

Once a book is written like this, you will also be a talent.

This line of writing is so similar. It's exactly the same as One Ball Against a Thousand and Tyrant on the Court. They both say Heilongjiang.

It's well written. As I was reading it, I suddenly thought of a person who doesn't love anyone around the mask.

The highlight? Hongjun and Tiandao PK

I don't like fruit-flavored mooncakes, but I'm right that the mooncakes are too sweet. They're cloyingly sweet.

In a novel with a modern setting, the government is actually called the imperial court? The sense of violation is so strong that I didn't want to watch it from the beginning

Beat a few fools and make them angry for two chapters.

Read it after you reach 500,000 words. Come on, author.

Sorry to bother you

To be honest, we have been fighting this evil dragon war for several years.

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