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Are you serious? Describe a man who is as shy as a flower and a fish in a swallow? Are you sure this is a handsome man and not a shemale?
Wei Jie (286 AD - June 20, 312 AD), nicknamed Shubao and nicknamed Hu, was a native of Anyi County, Hedong County (now Xia County, Shanxi Province). He was the great-grandson of Cao Wei Shangshu Wei Jian and the grandson of Taibao Guan. A metaphysician and official of the Jin Dynasty, he was one of the four most beautiful men in ancient China.
The author did what I always wanted to do but failed to do
I feel like I have to be like Yang Lianting to be a coward. The protagonist is so cowardly that he dare not speak. Many female protagonists must be strong. The writing is like a coward, which is very poisonous.
Why does his father feel like a retarded person? After all, he is also Wang Xizhi. Can we not insult Wang Xizhi? The protagonist also has a submissive personality, but he still wants to stand up. He should be able to bear it.
Isn't the writing too effeminate? If a man goes to another world, his personality will change?
Now my mind is filled with 1. The scene of the beautiful male protagonist dying and everyone eating his body. 2. The scene of the male protagonist being carried away. 3. The male protagonist fainted in the prison, his hair wet with sweat, and was interrogated by the Queen herself. *** I am not pure anymore. I need to read some hot-blooded novels to get it back.
I just made a mistake in writing that the main character is not a white lotus but a green tea. It's poisonous and really too girly.
Are you writing about a sissy? **Who?
The protagonist's character is a bit cowardly, so I haven't seen any powerful and good-looking girls like Diao Chan or handsome men, but the protagonist is shockingly more handsome than them. Only a protagonist who is independent, strong, and not afraid of power can be more attractive to girls, right? I feel that the protagonist's character is not in line with the approval of Feilu readers.
Being poisoned, it would be better to just write about the heroine. The protagonist doesn't know anything and looks like a fool
He is the most handsome prostitute duck in Wanyuyuan
Isn't it annoying that you write about the system in every picture? I seriously doubt your word count.
The levels are so awkward. Restaurant level, pond level, ocean level, etc. Do you dare to make it more awkward?
That's awesome. Others can't become a god-level civilization in millions of years. You can become a god-level civilization in less than 50 days.
This theme is still okay
What's going on? Why did you end up in Harry Potter?
Add the word "" to any form, so watery
Has the protagonist met his uncle?
Why does it feel a bit like Sarutobi and Danzo...
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