The Poisonous Gu of the Immortal Realm

To tell a joke, the protagonist has the Hun Tian Baojian and also practices the Beiming Magic Technique.

I gave it to my girl at the beginning, which made my liver hurt.

No wonder he rushes to the street, the protagonist is so stupid

I came here to see the poison, why did it become like this?

The theme is poison, so you should write about some martial arts and items related to poison. Why are you writing blindly?

If he wasn't the protagonist, he would have died thousands of times, so why would he want a novel to hit the streets? The novel hit the streets and the main character died

There is no sense of immersion and the main character is a stupid weakling.

The surname is Jia and the given name is Chi You. You can tell it is fake as soon as you hear it.

Why are there so many of these two waiting for me?

The name is so domineering, inside...