I Am Thirty-Six Thieves

It's just a bunch of nonsense. I'm watching the plot, not the netizens, who are talking nonsense and endlessly. I've read three chapters, which is only one chapter of the plot. Both of them are nonsense. Why are you doing so much nonsense? When the question comes up, you just answer it directly. After you answer it, just tell me what the reward is. How can you draw three pictures with a grind? You can finish writing in one piece, grind three pictures, and two of them are nonsense. This is too watery. As soon as you finish setting the question, a mouse will appear immediately. Alas, give the protagonist a chance to show off. Rather than saying that the protagonist is awesome, it is better to say that she is a sweeper. Star, wherever you go, there will be animals and ferocious beasts, and you can meet them by chance. You can meet mice without even having to eat. The plot should be allowed to take its course. Don't deliberately write something, it will only make people disgusted. A novel should focus on the plot, not nonsense. Just say what you said after answering the question.

Commentary on the first chapter of "I Am Thirty-Six Thieves" written by Shanks: Luo Tianda.