Fantasy: the Beginning of the Kendo Ancestor!

I was speechless after reading the introduction. If there were no ancient songs in that world, then why were there ancient musical instruments that came out of stones? It's like there is no firearm but there are bullets

The author is just picking up bad money. There are three or four sentences of text, and then a lot of people are shocked. When the shock is over, seven or eight chapters are finished. As we get further and further into the water, we are endlessly shocked, and they are all repetitive. First, the world of Zhetian is shocked by the water for two chapters, then the perfect world is shocked for two or three chapters, and then the prehistoric world is shocked for one or two chapters. There is no need to write these separately, they can be combined together. Things that can be solved in one or two chapters have to be done one by one. I have lost my temper. I am currently writing the Dragon Talisman World, and I doubt the author can write hundreds of chapters.

By the way, why do you want Fang Yifan to be so good and prepare to find him a girlfriend? ? I was originally planning to continue chasing him, but I personally don't like the protagonist's way of dealing with people.

Can't practitioners in the fantasy world practice fasting? I am also afraid of drought and food shortage, so I don't want to write something that sounds like an emperor fighting for hegemony. If you run out of food, you can't catch the demons to eat, especially those who practice physical fitness. And I feel that the emperor in the fantasy world is very showy, and his strength is everything. You are at a higher level than your subordinates and can suppress him, but what if he gets the chance to overtake you? Will you still surrender? What is the significance of the army in a fantasy world? A high-level practitioner can kill 10 million people with just one slap

佛了，仙剑写那么长，好像这个才是主世界一样，简直是本末倒置，知道你对仙剑感兴趣，但你这么水谁受得了

Ennnnn this character... Speechless =_= I don't know who mentioned it first, do you think the lazy character is really lovable? This is really bad. You only read novels with passion, but you end up being so lazy? I don't want to do anything, and I really don't know what to read. The writing is right, but the character is too boring. Before I've even made a few bucks, I'm starting to complain that I'm not interested in money. Do you think you're Tony? I'm so speechless

He wanders around with one or two bodyguards around him, and he doesn't even know how he died. I don't have many close friends. You're awesome.

What the hell, that old man wasn't instantly defeated by Yujiro? Can you fight Yujiro?

写青春猪头的小说实在是少，而且央理戏份比较多的更少，这本我觉得写的很好了，最后一句，超喜欢双叶央理

It's also a teacher's work and it's excellent. The most important thing is that no one has written it.

Didn't the author end this book with a dream and then delete it and rewrite it?

Author, I am even more disappointed with you, please update. Br

I think it's well written, but there are too few updates.

After reading so many chapters at the beginning, I kept saying that Parker was a fire attribute. I was really confused.

Is drag racing worth the danger? Do you still play like that even if you have a golden finger? Is there something wrong with the protagonist's brain? Why do you have to be so desperate when you have a golden finger? Is drag racing worth it? Anyway, I'm in my 30s and can't accept it, so I'm still hiding it and saying it's okay? Is the protagonist mentally ill? Do you still play like that even if you have a golden finger? Silly enough

In the third picture of the author, you said that each sword individually is a top-level fifth-level magic weapon. How come together they are only a top-level fourth-level magic weapon?

If you don't want to write, you should go to the palace.

I don't know why, I just feel unhappy

Why is it that the second dimension is just like the one we had in our childhood? We don't have any shit here.

To be honest, it was quite well written, and the plot was too watery.

Author? There are a lot of typos, overlapping words, and missing words. Can't you check them? That's it for the first chapter!

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Exactly the same as Chapter 3.

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