My name is Shogo, an ordinary college student. I never dreamed that I would travel to the world of Kamen Rider. I originally thought that I would be in the world of Kamen Rider, but I never expected that I would jump directly to Tokio and become Tokiwa Shogo. I would only act submissively all day long. I was afraid of being directly caught by the old demon king, so I asked for help online. It was very urgent.
A new book written by a newcomer may not be very good, but I still need support.
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
The author can write 300,000 words, and everyone here is responsible.
I picked a chapter at random, the one about the patriarch, and added comments.
If the patriarch dies, please celebrate in the comment area and let me take a look.
I admire the author. The enemy is in whatever realm the protagonist is in. That's why Bei Murong appeared when the protagonist was an ordinary person. Murong Fu was innate, and above innate there were Di Gang and Tiangang. As a result, Qiao Feng, the author wrote about Tiangang after the protagonist was innate. , I endured this. Later, the main character Tiangang appeared. Mu Nianci, who was eighteen years old, came out. Your Mu Nianci was eighteen years old and in the same realm as Murong Fu, right? I also endured it. But in the end, you insisted on writing a trick and didn't even write the name of Digang realm, but the author The author insists on writing that he is a young genius. The key is that these supporting actors are still in the Song Dynasty. How did Murong Fu become so famous in the world? It is even more outrageous later. Everyone still remembers Sha Tongtian. Yang Kang is a small character. The author of Mader is because of the protagonist Tiantian. Gang, Sha Tongtian is also written as Tiangang realm, Ma Dezz, Murong Fu is innate, Di Gang is after Xiantian, and Tiangang is after Di Gang. As a result, because he appeared early, Murong Fu is two realms lower than Sha Tongtian. Author, wake up, you **write about mixed martial arts
Seeing Gates Tsukuyomi and Woz arrive at the scene directly awakened the moment of blessing, OhmaZIO
scare them to death
This author is a gamer
Who told you that Star Gods can be upgraded by absorbing energy? The key to Yun is not like you!
Forget it, I can only say that this book is not suitable for me. I tried reading it several times but couldn't stand it. If the author wrote it elsewhere, maybe the data would be better. Most of the novels in Feilu are read for fun, but the author keeps putting the protagonist or heroine in crisis. For example, in the part between Tengfei and Lulu, the other party directly hugged Lulu before the protagonist arrived. It is not good to avoid lightning in this regard. After all, you could have let the protagonist arrive in advance, and in the previous part, how many enemies has the protagonist provoked? The disciple of the sect master, the ancestor of the Bronze Corpse, and the sect behind it. The protagonist has been making enemies and falling into crises repeatedly. In addition, in most novels about a comprehensive world view, the protagonist either grows up quickly, or is directly invincible, or only faces enemies that can be defeated easily. At worst, there will be a trump card that can turn the table, but the protagonist has to explode every time he fights to fight back. It can only be said that it is not suitable for Fei Lu.
Are you serious about Wang Yuyan and Li Canghai arranging together?
This monthly pass and everything are all paid for, right? And the author is a cuckold?
What the hell, I won't let you talk about it if I don't update it. Go to the palace as soon as possible. Don't waste everyone's time.
Is there no system? You must know that a novel is a novel and a script is a script
If you don't do it as a good person, if you don't do it as a congenital god, then you will become a monster?
Is it possible for a rich man with hundreds of billions of dollars to kill his wife in a car accident? For anyone with so much money, who's car wouldn't be super safe? Where are the bodyguards around? At the very least, he is a retired special forces soldier. Isn't this inevitable? If someone kills someone for money, can the protagonist still inherit the property?
The front is fine, but the more you look at the back, the less interesting it becomes.
In fact, 30 million years ago, the dark Tiga or the Tiga who turned into light could indeed be ranked second. But Da Gu transformed into light and entered the fighting body left behind by Tiga. He was really no match for Zero! How could he be superior to Regedo and the King of Ultra?
This game successfully gave me a phobia of the deep sea. It used to be okay to look at the deep sea, but now I am afraid that a Leviathan will suddenly appear when I look at the deep sea.
Solanum nigrum is a tragedy. When Long Yang died, she sacrificed the sword, and she sacrificed the sword again to fight the evil sword fairy. Who did she offend? It's such a tragedy.
This protagonist is a bit too j-shaped. Too floaty. And then there's something not very good about this system. Systems like this. The sensory system is the protagonist. The main character is just a puppet who gains power and floats like crazy.
We have collected Yamabuki Hana Rin, Mika, Izumi Hina, Tsukuyomi, and Kadoyaji's sister. Kadoyaji's appearance will definitely be a classic.
Seeing that the author, who is also a newcomer, directly received ** flowers, shouldn't you express your gratitude?
A missing person returns and then disappears?
I finally found a book with a protagonist who can transform into the Demon King of Time, come on
Damn it, where's today's update?
The name of the protagonist is too dramatic. Do you think I haven't watched Jigong?
I like the character Xiao Chuchu in Magic Phone.
How to deal with the Dragon Rider Chapter? The most troublesome part of the King of Time plot is the Dragon Rider chapter, which is difficult to connect with TV.
The next day and even now I still can't read that chapter.
What's going on? Why isn't it updated again?
Commentary on Chapter 003: Obtaining Martial Arts Secrets, "Martial Arts: Knowing the Plot, I'm Like a Fish in Water" by Wuxia San.
About "I, the Master Qingyun, Ten Thousand Immortals Come to the Court" written by "I am the Master Qingyun" written by Menya Chapter 6: Divine Sword and Thunder Jue Chapter Summary.
Regarding Chapter 23 of "CF: The World's No. 1 Offensive Sniper" written by Yi Yiyi, four kills in a single round, EP's target! Gu Yan: Two against one, no martial ethics! Chapter review.
The author can write 300,000 words, and everyone here is responsible.
I picked a chapter at random, the one about the patriarch, and added comments. If the patriarch dies, please celebrate in the comment area and let me take a look.
I admire the author. The enemy is in whatever realm the protagonist is in. That's why Bei Murong appeared when the protagonist was an ordinary person. Murong Fu was innate, and above innate there were Di Gang and Tiangang. As a result, Qiao Feng, the author wrote about Tiangang after the protagonist was innate. , I endured this. Later, the main character Tiangang appeared. Mu Nianci, who was eighteen years old, came out. Your Mu Nianci was eighteen years old and in the same realm as Murong Fu, right? I also endured it. But in the end, you insisted on writing a trick and didn't even write the name of Digang realm, but the author The author insists on writing that he is a young genius. The key is that these supporting actors are still in the Song Dynasty. How did Murong Fu become so famous in the world? It is even more outrageous later. Everyone still remembers Sha Tongtian. Yang Kang is a small character. The author of Mader is because of the protagonist Tiantian. Gang, Sha Tongtian is also written as Tiangang realm, Ma Dezz, Murong Fu is innate, Di Gang is after Xiantian, and Tiangang is after Di Gang. As a result, because he appeared early, Murong Fu is two realms lower than Sha Tongtian. Author, wake up, you **write about mixed martial arts
Seeing Gates Tsukuyomi and Woz arrive at the scene directly awakened the moment of blessing, OhmaZIO scare them to death
This author is a gamer Who told you that Star Gods can be upgraded by absorbing energy? The key to Yun is not like you!
Forget it, I can only say that this book is not suitable for me. I tried reading it several times but couldn't stand it. If the author wrote it elsewhere, maybe the data would be better. Most of the novels in Feilu are read for fun, but the author keeps putting the protagonist or heroine in crisis. For example, in the part between Tengfei and Lulu, the other party directly hugged Lulu before the protagonist arrived. It is not good to avoid lightning in this regard. After all, you could have let the protagonist arrive in advance, and in the previous part, how many enemies has the protagonist provoked? The disciple of the sect master, the ancestor of the Bronze Corpse, and the sect behind it. The protagonist has been making enemies and falling into crises repeatedly. In addition, in most novels about a comprehensive world view, the protagonist either grows up quickly, or is directly invincible, or only faces enemies that can be defeated easily. At worst, there will be a trump card that can turn the table, but the protagonist has to explode every time he fights to fight back. It can only be said that it is not suitable for Fei Lu.
Are you serious about Wang Yuyan and Li Canghai arranging together?
This monthly pass and everything are all paid for, right? And the author is a cuckold?
What the hell, I won't let you talk about it if I don't update it. Go to the palace as soon as possible. Don't waste everyone's time.
Is there no system? You must know that a novel is a novel and a script is a script
If you don't do it as a good person, if you don't do it as a congenital god, then you will become a monster?
Is it possible for a rich man with hundreds of billions of dollars to kill his wife in a car accident? For anyone with so much money, who's car wouldn't be super safe? Where are the bodyguards around? At the very least, he is a retired special forces soldier. Isn't this inevitable? If someone kills someone for money, can the protagonist still inherit the property?
The front is fine, but the more you look at the back, the less interesting it becomes.
In fact, 30 million years ago, the dark Tiga or the Tiga who turned into light could indeed be ranked second. But Da Gu transformed into light and entered the fighting body left behind by Tiga. He was really no match for Zero! How could he be superior to Regedo and the King of Ultra?
This game successfully gave me a phobia of the deep sea. It used to be okay to look at the deep sea, but now I am afraid that a Leviathan will suddenly appear when I look at the deep sea.
Solanum nigrum is a tragedy. When Long Yang died, she sacrificed the sword, and she sacrificed the sword again to fight the evil sword fairy. Who did she offend? It's such a tragedy.
This protagonist is a bit too j-shaped. Too floaty. And then there's something not very good about this system. Systems like this. The sensory system is the protagonist. The main character is just a puppet who gains power and floats like crazy.
We have collected Yamabuki Hana Rin, Mika, Izumi Hina, Tsukuyomi, and Kadoyaji's sister. Kadoyaji's appearance will definitely be a classic.
Seeing that the author, who is also a newcomer, directly received ** flowers, shouldn't you express your gratitude?
A missing person returns and then disappears?
I finally found a book with a protagonist who can transform into the Demon King of Time, come on
Damn it, where's today's update?
The name of the protagonist is too dramatic. Do you think I haven't watched Jigong?
I like the character Xiao Chuchu in Magic Phone.
How to deal with the Dragon Rider Chapter? The most troublesome part of the King of Time plot is the Dragon Rider chapter, which is difficult to connect with TV.
The next day and even now I still can't read that chapter.
What's going on? Why isn't it updated again?
Commentary on Chapter 003: Obtaining Martial Arts Secrets, "Martial Arts: Knowing the Plot, I'm Like a Fish in Water" by Wuxia San.
About "I, the Master Qingyun, Ten Thousand Immortals Come to the Court" written by "I am the Master Qingyun" written by Menya Chapter 6: Divine Sword and Thunder Jue Chapter Summary.
Regarding Chapter 23 of "CF: The World's No. 1 Offensive Sniper" written by Yi Yiyi, four kills in a single round, EP's target! Gu Yan: Two against one, no martial ethics! Chapter review.