Urban: Livestreaming a Carefree Life in the Cretaceous

I finished writing about Venus, Saturn, Mars, Mercury, Jupiter, the Sun and the Moon. I thought there was no such subject matter anymore, but you came up with the Cretaceous Period for me? Can such themes be broadcast live in the past to the future?

Isn't it insulting people's intelligence when you write novels here? What kind of high technology can be exchanged for? The protagonist's exchange of high technology will reveal his flaws. If you write it like this, it will directly reveal that the protagonist has a system. It's an idiot to write this. But the more I write later, the less immersive it becomes. Make the main character look like an idiot. Who travels to the Cretaceous is the protagonist's reaction. To be honest, your novel becomes more and more outrageous as you write it. After reading it, you have no sense of empathy at all, and you have no interest in reading it.

Your character creation itself is not good, this is a fact. If your writing is not good, I will comment and point out your mistakes. Remember, this is not a scolding or a rant. The reason why I commented like this is because I thought the title of this novel was pretty good at first, but when I read it later, I realized that the problem was a bit big. It can be said that the character creation is very poor. That's why I pointed out your mistake. I believe that readers who have read Feilu for two or three years will definitely feel awkward when reading the first few chapters of your book. It can be said that the descriptions in the first few chapters of this book are very poor. It gives the protagonist the feeling that he has not traveled to the age of dinosaurs at all. It's like playing house.

You even gave the wrong system. In this era, the protagonist should not be a technological system. Rather, it should be a genetic system or an evolutionary system. This is consistent with the dinosaur era where the protagonist lives. You have created a technological system for the protagonist. How do I fill in the blanks at the end? What if the audience asked where the protagonist got his technology? Said it was given by aliens! Moreover, the character you created for the protagonist is also very good. It can be said that you did not write well at all in shaping the character. There is also the character of the audience, the author, tell me. Whoever sees an ant as big as a cow is not afraid but interested in seeing it. This alone is what you wrote. I feel like your diploma is not very good. It's like writing a novel for the first time.

You really never forget to give away your daughter. You even gave away your daughter in such dangerous times in ancient times. Are you impatient with life?

In your setting, the animals have been enlarged dozens, hundreds or even thousands of times, so it is impossible for the plants not to be enlarged. After all, animals are so big and consume a lot of food. If the volume of a leaf is the same as it is now, then I am afraid that any food dragon in your work can easily eat less than half of the city's leaves. And what do I want to express by saying this? You can prove that just photographing trees directly is enough. It has also been enlarged. I asked you, do you have trees of several hundred meters in society now? Isn't this evidence? There is still no evidence.

The protagonist is an idiot but still has everything under control, a fool who is exploited by the system

When I see a girl, I scream like a girl and lick* one

Is the author's IQ compromised? A seventy or eighty meter Tyrannosaurus Rex? The largest Tyrannosaurus rex was only about 14 meters long

First of all, you 70-80-meter Tyrannosaurus rex, damn, even if it's a novel, can you be more normal? Do you know Godzilla? The first and second generation Godzilla is only 50 meters long, and the third generation Godzilla is as high as 80 meters. Eighty meters is as high as a twenty-five to twenty-eight-story building. What the hell is this, Godzilla's brother? Dragon Silla?