Fight to Break the World Getaway

Well, the first novel I read was Fighting to Break the Sky, but I always felt that I had some regrets after reading it, and I wanted to try to see if I could complete it. This is my first time trying to write a novel. I hope you can give me some advice. Thank you all. No more talking, he came, he fell from the sky... This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.