Love Is in the Air 5: I Own a View of Immortality

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Overall, it's pretty good, but the author doesn't feel uncomfortable when he writes about Zhang Wei's marriage at the end. As a reader, when reading a novel, he usually assumes the role of the protagonist. It's okay for you as a single female protagonist, but don't you find it difficult to accept someone else marrying a daughter-in-law who is exactly like you? Let's not talk about reality. After all, this is a novel, but it is even more uncomfortable just because it is a novel.

Why does a 20-year-old girl have to form a CP with a 35-year-old Zhang Wei? It can be said that they are both father-daughter CPs. What does Zhang Wei deserve? Sympathy. In one episode of donation, Zhang Wei only donated "5 yuan". He just said that this was the first time Zhang Wei held three parties!! And it's not for the orphanage, just to pursue Qin Yumo

Let me go, Zhuge Dali's boyfriend can form a reinforced company in Feilu

Give the rose to Zhang Wei... Author, what kind of poison did you take? If you want to have a single heroine, don't write about her. You can write about her. Can't you just let her come out and make a fuss and leave? It has to be Zhang Wei, right?

You will get sprayed when you go under the water. You have to believe me. It's already been two hundred chapters and you're still like this. If you don't show off, you'll be in trouble. Why, are you still going to tell a story like a soap opera in which the male and female protagonists go through joys and sorrows, various hardships, and finally achieve success in hundreds of chapters? Please, you are writing an online article. What annoys us the most is this kind of grinding. You tell me, either you set the protagonist's age appropriately, or you don't provoke the heroine. Couldn't you just save the heroine when you were in the water? You have to wear a mask, why, is it fun to hang us up? Just let it go if you have a relationship. If you have been arguing for so long and still haven't shown your cards, aren't you looking for a slut? The biggest reading point of this book is that Brother Ji'er, you directly said that you still plan to fight for hundreds of chapters before showing off? Does the heroine need to investigate various clues to find out that Jingxuan actually disappeared more than ten years ago and her life and death are unknown, and then she comes to doubt the hero before showing off? If so, just tell me, I'm really crazy about you

I really feel that curry sauce is just stupid. If it is a little stupid, it is called cute and stupid. If it is ugly and silly, it is called stupid.

To be honest, even if the pig's feet are Taoist priests, they are still too holy. It's really depressing to watch, and it doesn't feel good at all.

Forget it, fuck it, you are letting it go even though you are ready to dig your master's grave, author, you are so generous, I am really fucked, I don't want to say anything about it from the first chapter till now. It is the first time someone comes to provoke you and you said that others are just profit-driven and your nature is quite good.