Everything Store System
万物商店系统
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 60k Words
- Subgenre
- Modern Cultivation
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
30Chapters
2.6MReads
97Flowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 2
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Author, your writing is neither good nor bad. For example, in the opening scene when you save Xiao Ya, when the villain calls, you can add a he said between what the protagonist and the villain say. This can prevent careless readers from being confused about what the protagonist and the villain say. There's nothing bad about anything else, and I'm not a bastard. However, you can write more about the details, which can reduce the number of readers who will be confused by the plot because the plot is too fast.
The direction of the written content is @author?