Sui Feng came to the world of Zhan·Red Eyes due to an accident!
When I came to this world, I also got a sign-in system!
"Ding! Sign-in is complete! Get a bottle of physical enhancement liquid!"
"Ding! Sign-in completed! Obtained skill: Sword Mastery!"
"Ding! Sign-in completed! Obtained skill: Medical Proficiency"
"Ding! Sign-in is complete! Get a pair of Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan!"
.....
So, with the help of the check-in system, you can become a traveler traveling all over the world! Leave your own traces in the world!
--The current world is the world of Zhantong--the next world is the battle!
This book is a slow-burner! It may be less exciting in the early stage! I apologize to everyone!
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
Haha, full intermarriage, what does the author think of the line of inheritance, is it a virus? The bloodline will become thin due to intermarriage with ordinary people. The author is really a self-centered person. He only believes in what he thinks is right. If he can intermarry at will, the bloodline will not be thinned and the bloodline will not be awakened. Why do you think people don't intermarry on a large scale? The author's knowledge is too shallow. It is difficult for people to agree with this kind of fan.
It's great to get a new Ultraman by knowing the plot, it's great to unlock the ultimate arcana that no one else has, and it's even more exciting to get the mysterious arcana that no one knows about. In these aspects, everyone has a great sense of immersion, and watching it is full of passion and blood.
The heroine is more awkward. The protagonist and Chen are classmates who get along day and night and occasionally date. It's not strange to be together, but to the reader, it's like "who are you ****ing?" The reader does not have a three-dimensional sense of the heroine. The misalignment of the two perspectives causes the loss of the sense of substitution between the reader and the protagonist.
At this time, I have to mention the role of labels. Although labels such as "school beauty", "saint" and "fairy" are overused, they are clear enough.
For example:
"Who are you xx?"
"I am the school beauty of xx"
"Oh, you xx school beauty, now you have to fall in love."
When choosing a school beauty between classmates and the school beauty, the protagonist makes a choice that meets the readers' expectations, and then the sense of substitution is heightened.
Nothing else, just curious about Holy Spirit Puni?
I don't understand. You say he is a native, and he has a system and knows people he has never met. You say he is a time traveler, but he doesn't know the plot. There are only two chakras in Naruto's body, where does the soul come from. When I saw this, I couldn't help but want to complain.
后面代写了？剧情对不上，主角的性格也有变化，故事线也变了。看的很懵逼
The Eternal Eye can't beat the weakened one, even the illusion of kaleidoscope can kill the weakened one instantly. Your upgraded version of the eternal eye can't kill the weakened one instantly. It's really the best of **
The male protagonist is a **** scumbag. He has a wife and still messes around with other women. Are you sick? You're still sleeping on the same bed. Why are you sleeping with someone else if you don't have any feelings? Divorce without any explanation? Watching
The subject matter of this book is relatively new. It's just about eunuchs. Otherwise it should be good.
Zhan Chitong alone has almost 10 harems. I don't know what to say about the rest of the world. Anyway, this is a Stallion Bulldozer novel!
It's well written, I hope you can continue to update it and don't want to be a eunuch.
So do you still want to fight? Don't you still have some unfinished tasks? With 13 sources of life, don't all 13 girls have to fall in love with the protagonist?
Wasn't it ghostwritten? Just watch it as long as it's not ghostwritten. Now Fei Lu is ghostwritten and it gives me a headache.
The protagonist actually dares to threaten the system** The protagonist gets all his power from the system, how dare he threaten the system?
There are no such masterpieces as "The Night Ward", "The Dark Bible", "Prison Battleship", and "Father's Love is Like a Mountain"...
Author: old driver
Brother, is it so difficult for you to open Susan and even defeat the weakened first tail?
With Sui Feng, where's the grapefruit?
You can have a crazy Keke Emperor
Don't you have any idea about money? Miya and Xiaoxin are eating together. Xiaoxin's Big Mac set meal is only 2,000 yen.
You can think of it this way, every world has a parallel universe
In some worlds, the genders are reversed.
For example, the male protagonist is female and the female protagonist is male.
So it's not a shemale,
Iron Man's feminine version marries Captain America in Marvel's parallel world
You say six is not six, but I think it is six anyway.
I hope someone sees it, qwq,
That's why I chose to date the protagonist of the battle, a girl
Oliha Steel... At first glance, it looks like Oliha Steel
It's good-looking, but it's annoying not to have any girls.
Chapter 38: Should the issue of the eight-year war of resistance in the deep love and mist be dealt with in this way? This is also spreading a mistake. The TV series is just He Shuhuan's narration, not a dialogue, so it is not a mistake.
Author. You can write about the Witch's Night Banquet in Witch Rider. Or the mechanical variant in Chiqi
VlP, sporadic, alas! The existence of my majestic second-level Red Star, I did not expect to fall to this level. I have given up. I hope that future generations can study hard and practice hard, surpass my cultivation as soon as possible, and prove the supreme Red Star Emperor. I have said so much and no one has surpassed me. It seems that my cultivation is not that annoying (funny to save my life). .
Pretty solid, but I**. I really don't know why there are so many rewards.
If you can really rely on perseverance to finish writing, the first lock screen is okay, but it is only a million words.
I was just curious, why did I go to Neptune as soon as I wrote it?
I deliberately watched all the programs he participated in
Why does the word "crayfish" appear as "long"?
Commentary on Chapter 23: Colorful Macaws written by Gene Dynamics "I'm so lucky, survival in the wilderness became a vacation".
Haha, full intermarriage, what does the author think of the line of inheritance, is it a virus? The bloodline will become thin due to intermarriage with ordinary people. The author is really a self-centered person. He only believes in what he thinks is right. If he can intermarry at will, the bloodline will not be thinned and the bloodline will not be awakened. Why do you think people don't intermarry on a large scale? The author's knowledge is too shallow. It is difficult for people to agree with this kind of fan.
It's great to get a new Ultraman by knowing the plot, it's great to unlock the ultimate arcana that no one else has, and it's even more exciting to get the mysterious arcana that no one knows about. In these aspects, everyone has a great sense of immersion, and watching it is full of passion and blood. The heroine is more awkward. The protagonist and Chen are classmates who get along day and night and occasionally date. It's not strange to be together, but to the reader, it's like "who are you ****ing?" The reader does not have a three-dimensional sense of the heroine. The misalignment of the two perspectives causes the loss of the sense of substitution between the reader and the protagonist. At this time, I have to mention the role of labels. Although labels such as "school beauty", "saint" and "fairy" are overused, they are clear enough. For example: "Who are you xx?" "I am the school beauty of xx" "Oh, you xx school beauty, now you have to fall in love." When choosing a school beauty between classmates and the school beauty, the protagonist makes a choice that meets the readers' expectations, and then the sense of substitution is heightened.
Nothing else, just curious about Holy Spirit Puni?
I don't understand. You say he is a native, and he has a system and knows people he has never met. You say he is a time traveler, but he doesn't know the plot. There are only two chakras in Naruto's body, where does the soul come from. When I saw this, I couldn't help but want to complain.
后面代写了？剧情对不上，主角的性格也有变化，故事线也变了。看的很懵逼
The Eternal Eye can't beat the weakened one, even the illusion of kaleidoscope can kill the weakened one instantly. Your upgraded version of the eternal eye can't kill the weakened one instantly. It's really the best of **
The male protagonist is a **** scumbag. He has a wife and still messes around with other women. Are you sick? You're still sleeping on the same bed. Why are you sleeping with someone else if you don't have any feelings? Divorce without any explanation? Watching
The subject matter of this book is relatively new. It's just about eunuchs. Otherwise it should be good.
Zhan Chitong alone has almost 10 harems. I don't know what to say about the rest of the world. Anyway, this is a Stallion Bulldozer novel!
It's well written, I hope you can continue to update it and don't want to be a eunuch.
So do you still want to fight? Don't you still have some unfinished tasks? With 13 sources of life, don't all 13 girls have to fall in love with the protagonist?
Wasn't it ghostwritten? Just watch it as long as it's not ghostwritten. Now Fei Lu is ghostwritten and it gives me a headache.
The protagonist actually dares to threaten the system** The protagonist gets all his power from the system, how dare he threaten the system?
There are no such masterpieces as "The Night Ward", "The Dark Bible", "Prison Battleship", and "Father's Love is Like a Mountain"... Author: old driver
Brother, is it so difficult for you to open Susan and even defeat the weakened first tail?
With Sui Feng, where's the grapefruit?
You can have a crazy Keke Emperor
Don't you have any idea about money? Miya and Xiaoxin are eating together. Xiaoxin's Big Mac set meal is only 2,000 yen.
You can think of it this way, every world has a parallel universe In some worlds, the genders are reversed. For example, the male protagonist is female and the female protagonist is male. So it's not a shemale, Iron Man's feminine version marries Captain America in Marvel's parallel world You say six is not six, but I think it is six anyway. I hope someone sees it, qwq, That's why I chose to date the protagonist of the battle, a girl
Oliha Steel... At first glance, it looks like Oliha Steel
It's good-looking, but it's annoying not to have any girls.
Chapter 38: Should the issue of the eight-year war of resistance in the deep love and mist be dealt with in this way? This is also spreading a mistake. The TV series is just He Shuhuan's narration, not a dialogue, so it is not a mistake.
Author. You can write about the Witch's Night Banquet in Witch Rider. Or the mechanical variant in Chiqi
VlP, sporadic, alas! The existence of my majestic second-level Red Star, I did not expect to fall to this level. I have given up. I hope that future generations can study hard and practice hard, surpass my cultivation as soon as possible, and prove the supreme Red Star Emperor. I have said so much and no one has surpassed me. It seems that my cultivation is not that annoying (funny to save my life). .
Pretty solid, but I**. I really don't know why there are so many rewards.
If you can really rely on perseverance to finish writing, the first lock screen is okay, but it is only a million words.
I was just curious, why did I go to Neptune as soon as I wrote it?
I deliberately watched all the programs he participated in
Why does the word "crayfish" appear as "long"?
Commentary on Chapter 23: Colorful Macaws written by Gene Dynamics "I'm so lucky, survival in the wilderness became a vacation".