Prehistoric: Pangu's First Disciple

If it is okay to change the name, say that he is the chief disciple of Pangu and then trick the ancestral witch to death, the witch clan, refer to the setting of the relationship between the ancestral witch and Pangu in the prehistoric times, I am afraid it is not an undercover agent of heaven.

Keep saying that it is not for the general trend, but your appearance has already changed the situation. Since the enemy is destined to strike first. **Sousou's. What about preaching?

It's a mess, there's no logic, write about you**

It's like a mentally retarded novel with no logic.

After Chapter 200, I can't understand what I'm writing. I've ghostwritten it, and it doesn't match up with the previous chapter at all.

Did it suddenly stop after two hundred chapters? Just, confused...

The author is really stupid. Before Hongmeng was destroyed, everything had the attributes of Hongmeng. It was so funny, just like is there possible innate spiritual energy in chaos? . This is impossible, the author really is **.

It's been 6 days and the author ran away with his sister-in-law?

The protagonist licks Nuwa a little

I suggest you stop reading. Starting from Chapter 172, the setting gradually becomes chaotic. The protagonist's magic weapon Xinghuang Banner inexplicably ended up in the hands of Chanjiao. The protagonist's son Kong Xuan Dapeng also inexplicably listened to Hongjun's command, and Hongjun still ordered them to attack Xiqi. Then Yang Jian, who was instigated by Shen Gongbao and rebelled, also returned to Xiqi inexplicably.

Everyone knows that if you are a Taoist, even if you strive for this, you don't dare to do that. So why are you pretending to be competitive?

What the hell is this thing written about? The preface doesn't match the subtitles. It's just a big injustice.

Hahaha, look at what the bureau says, the Red Army, Luo Hou can be ranked in the top ten of the three thousand chaos gods and demons, what are you thinking about, where did you write about cause and effect, fate?

Commentary on Chapter 118 of Fuxi's Reincarnation and Shennong's Birth in "The Great Desolation: Pangu's First Disciple" written by Tianshi Qiyun.

Commentary on the fourth chapter of "The Great Desolation: Pangu's First Disciple" written by Tianshi Qiyun. After the creation of heaven, he took root on the ground.

About the Celestial Master's Qi Yun in "The Great Desolation: Pangu's First Disciple" Chapter 172 Heavenly Desire Realm vs. Central Wuji Xinghuang Banner! Chapter review.

Author, I saw you said that you have problems with your collection. I also write a book and give you some of my opinions. Feilu's book collection is mainly affected by the title and introduction. Both of your books have problems with their titles and introductions. If you compare the title and introduction of your book with those on the sales list, there will be no selling point. It's like saying something, but others can't get any valid information.