Tomb Robbery: Start from the Nine Gates

When I first watched the beginning, it felt like a running story, without any emotional ups and downs, but other than that, it felt okay.

First, there are so many typos. Second, the sentences are very unclear, and there are many sentences to associate with. Looks very tired

I don't know why, but after reading two chapters, I felt very awkward. . .

I'm both timid and reluctant. If I don't dare to write the tomb robber's name, I'll change it to the closest one, Zhang Qishan? ? Poisoned to death in the name.

Why doesn't Yin Xinyue accept it? Forget it, I won't watch it if I don't accept it.

There's something wrong with him, he's like a robber, deceiving himself and others while doing Versailles. The author is stupid

I look confused. Is it my imagination?

Boom boom boom boom boom boom boom more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

His name should be Qi Tiezui, not Qi Tongzui

The protagonist and Chen Yulou robbed the tomb, and ended up getting married without taking anything. So why did the protagonist rob the tomb? People rob the tomb either for money or to relieve the curse or live forever. The protagonist is already immortal, has no shortage of money, and has no curse. Then he went to rob the tomb without any reason, which made me a little confused!

It's so confusing, I can't even see the plot clearly.

Readers, don't say I won't accept it, I don't even know if I will. Then I will give it to Lao Hu.

"This knife is very similar to the Tang Dao, but it is sharper than the Tang Dao." Would it be better to change it to "The knife is in the style of the Tang Dao, sharper and sharper." "The letter is from Chen Yulou. It means that a large tomb from the Tang Dynasty has been discovered. He is having some trouble. Please ask him to help him." Can it be replaced by "The letter is from Chen Yulou. It is said that a large tomb from the Tang Dynasty has been discovered. It is a bit difficult and needs Chen Yulou's help." In addition, try not to repeat a certain word in a sentence. If it is really necessary, you can use synonyms. The choice of words and sentences is not very good, and it feels a bit like reading a primary school student's composition.

Chapter 2 has just transformed into a corpse, and Chapter 3 has arrived at the waterfall...

All I can say is that your food is tasteless.

What the hell, I can't understand it at all

I am writing a novel in Feilu, starting with the first chapter **Reader! Look, I've already thought of a new novel title for you, go ahead and write it!

In the first chapter, not long after Qi Tongzui arrived in Changsha, the protagonist gave him a sum of money. In the fifth chapter, among the nine gates in the fifth chapter, Qi Tiezui was in the eighth gate!

Isn't it the Faqiu seal that marks Faqiu? When did it become a ruler?

If you really don't know how to write, then don't write. It's very uncomfortable for people to see what they do these things every day.

What does episode 113 mean?

There are a lot of typos that I won't mention, as online novels don't care about it that much. But can we stop making trouble with the plot and story? The key story is briefly mentioned? Is it unclear? Is there really something wrong with the expression? I saw a few of them and they are real**

About the book "Tomb Robbery: Starting from the Nine Gates" written by Missing the Heaven List, Chapter 7: Nine Gates! (Please collect flowers) Chapter review.