The Handsome Man in a Matriarchal World

I can probably still read what you wrote. Remember to update more often.

I beg you, add punctuation

I haven't experienced writing a novel yet. The author keeps adding drama to it.

Commentary on Chapter 3: The cold-blooded teahouse owner of "Beautiful Men in a Feminist World" written by 13514065716.

Commentary on Chapter 9: Confessed, "Beautiful Men in a Feminist World" written by 13514065716.

He wants his characters to break the fourth wall, but his writing is terrible

The word "blood" is typo on page 3, and the sentence is very illogical and the word "shi" is used too much.

Author, you have to write well! Don't be impatient!

Why are there no quotes before and after?

The writing is quite good, please keep up the good work. . Come on more. .