The Shocking Case in Detective Di Renjie

It took three months to build a force comparable to that of Snake Spirit. It's so awesome. You trained so many masters in just three months. Why don't you go to heaven?

I copied your beginning to Caiyun Xiaomeng, and then kept clicking to continue. Seriously, brother, you can't even compare to AI.

If the preface doesn't match the postscript, I won't say it. If the writing is not good, don't deliberately chew on the words. I've been reading novels for fifteen or sixteen years, and this is the first time I've seen you write a novel like this. Convinced!

The group is established, the group is destroyed, the system transfers the martial arts, and the martial arts is abolished; is it jumping too fast?

The messy text does not connect to the following text. It is incomprehensible and inexplicable.

The Iron Hand Regiment is at most a local organization and there is still a certain gap between it and the Snake Spirit.

What is this thing written about??? It's a mess, the preface and the follower are really inconsistent!!!

Brother, can you have an outline before writing a novel? What are you writing about? What a running account! Someone just told you the place and you went to rob it, afraid that others wouldn't know? Can you use some brains?

It was okay at first, but then it became more and more confusing. It didn't feel like writing a novel. It seemed like I was writing whatever came to mind, and it was uninteresting.

Commentary on Chapter 16 Princess Yanran in "The Shocking Case of Detective Di Renjie" written by Murong Tianxia.