Naruto: at the Beginning, Naruto Was Taken Away

Stupid author, you don't know if the third generation is a good person? In the original work, you didn't see Naruto grilling fish with the third generation when he was a child?

If I traveled through time and captured Naruto's body, I would first create a clone technique. Yourself*yourself.

The finale of Lucy starts at the single-universe level, and may even reach the multi-universe level. How come the protagonist is so far apart?

It's really sick of me. In Feilu, I wrote a book with this kind of beginning. The main character looks like a second-stroke character. People who have watched Naruto don't know what Konoha is like? Not sure what the third generation is like? Are you still making excuses for rebelling against the village? Ill

Once upon a time, there was a Naruto who wanted to catch an Uchiha Itachi in a distant place, so he rode an Asuma and carried a gong, wading through mountains and rivers every day. Finally we reached a young field. Unexpectedly, a Kanjiu Wolf jumped out and rushed toward him with a burst of moonlight wind. He quickly took out five magic pills from his pocket - Akamaru, Shikamaru, Orochimaru, Konohamaru and Kidomaru. He ate them and immediately attracted Kyuubi and Gamabunta. Kyuubi stretched out his steel hand and opened his mouth to reveal his sharp Inuzuka teeth; Bunta opened his mouth and spit out fireworks that were able to drive out the Samadhi True Fire, knocking off Kankurou and fleeing. In order to replenish his physical strength, Naruto drank a bottle of Aburame Shi's milk, and then set out on the road again, passing through a field of Haruno cherry blossoms, a field of mountain ino, and a field of peach fields. He crossed a Kaka stream and finally caught Uchiha Itachi. In addition, he also picked up an Iruka, exchanged it for a bowl of red beans, and saw a rare pig deer butterfly. The "day" day was about to pass. Naruto looked at the evening sky and sighed, "The most beautiful thing is 'Red Sunset'"

The author, give me a tip, don't let some people say that they look at Naruto through colored glasses. Before the chunin exam, Naruto's pants were torn, and Sakura helped him sew them up, but Naruto grabbed Sakura's chest with his hands. During the battle of the Fuuma clan, Naruto was trapped in a chakra cage by the three-headed and six-armed monster of the Fuuma using advanced ninjutsu and was about to be crushed. When she was powdered, Sakura went to save Naruto before Hinata did in the later period, regardless of the disparity in power. She said that dying to protect the people you cherish is not terrible at all, and that Naruto died when the tailed beast was extracted and died regardless of the exhaustion of chakra. If it weren't for the fourth generation, Sakura would really be dead, completely forgetting the promise that medical ninjas could not fight before they died when they became apprentices...

Is this book dark? Are you treating us readers like monkeys? Author, are you afraid that you have some misunderstanding about darkness?

The Rasengan has no attributes and can be practiced by individuals. The only thing is whether they can learn it. The one with the wind attribute is the Rasenshuriken.

Marvelous. Then kill and destroy this world!!!

It makes me feel really frustrated. It's a typical abusive story. After more than 30 chapters, the whole book has no human warmth at all. Almost all of it consists of other people mocking and pricking the protagonist with needles. And the pace is too slow. It's more than thirty chapters and it's still a daily routine. As a Fei Lu novel, does the protagonist dare to be more awesome? When you were a child, you were allowed to do whatever you wanted, so couldn't you just grow up? It's enough to just write down a few things to attract hatred, but why not just skip growing up and enter the Ninja Academy?

In a story about torture for the sake of torture, the Sandaikai couldn't even decide between a jinchuriki and an ordinary village woman? Unfortunately, you spent a lot of time describing the third generation as a profit-oriented character, but you ended up making me laugh. You wrote so much black stuff, but the villain's IQ is just like this? That's it? The brainless ** article relies on so-called darkness and crazily tortures the main blogger's eyes. The result is a third-rate level. I am still enjoying it. I hope the protagonist dies quickly, because the protagonist is the fw of the author's younger brother.

I don't know why, but when I saw that the author changed Uchiha's Sharingan into a blood wheel eye, I really had the urge to **! ! ! Seriously. No matter how you accidentally see such obvious boundaries between the two blood stains, you will be able to distinguish them clearly, right? Unless you haven't watched Naruto at all

With the Reincarnation Eye, Yin Yang Dun beat Danzo for so long and still got slapped by Yin Yang.

The writing is like a mud horse and a retarded person. They are all from time travel. I don't know that Izanagi was tricked by that old man Danzo Shimura, and he was tricked several times.

**Damn it, there's no need to do this if you want to be watery, right? Do you like writing about fighting so much? *Your mother

, Sasuke has just gone to school, Shisui is not dead yet, how did Danzo get the Blood Ring Eye Mangekyō Betsutenjin?

Naruto, who has opened his samsara eye, can't defeat Danzo. Can he use his brain to write a book?

The beginning was written with such bitterness and hatred, but in the end it was over after killing three generations? Or is it because the system mission is... Outrageous? Since everyone has rebelled against the village, don't you know how to make a big deal? Don't you know how to cut it off? Either go for the dark style, or go for the lighthearted style. The bitterness and hatred that you laid out at the beginning seemed to be the dark style, but this is what ended up being written? ? ? Also... You practice ninjutsu by yourself every day... As for practicing *ma, don't you automatically know this system after seeing it? ?

I finally saw the article about Barcelona, ​​which brought me to tears, and the fans of Barcelona were ecstatic.

Why only write about worlds like Zhetian, all the worlds, the dragon talisman of countless ancient dusts, the world of Emperor Domination, the world of invincible Emperor, Fang Han's world of immortality, and the world of Yang Laoxiang's Holy King? The only one among them that has not passed the era is Perfection.

The first chapter is extremely toxic. . . The third generation can kill three jounin instantly? The Jonin itself is already qualified to know some of the village's secrets. Look at what tasks the Jonin is exposed to (the criteria for classifying task ratings...). It is impossible for a family Jonin. If a civilian Jonin follows the third generation, it is even less possible to kill them. . . Speechless

The eldest brother Iruka cares about Naruto very much

To be honest, Naruto has nothing to thank the third generation. The inheritance alone is enough for Naruto to grow up.

**, I'm not happy to watch it at all. Damn it, the villain is so brainless, how can he get past the second chapter? The author has no brains

Where is the author Mukahi Hinata? It seems that I have never encountered it.

Author Yun, apart from Zhang Zhiwei and Tian Jizhong of Jinhui Tongtian Ru, even Zhang Lingyu doesn't know about it. The Longhushan you wrote about knows it, and Tian Jizhong is only an insider of the Jiashen Rebellion, not an experiencer, not to mention, Even though he can control the wind and rain, he still keeps doing it. He even uses pill bite to show that the alien has weird abilities and is afraid of being tricked. Don't you understand what calling the wind and rain means? The pill bite can be chewed like jelly beans. It's hard to say whether the four crazy people can get close to each other.

Can you lend me vlp?

I've read a lot of people saying they want to destroy Konoha. As a result, they all went to lick Konoha. Is the book ruined?

Open a harem, open a harem, is there nothing else to write about besides opening a harem? A real man will watch the blood flow, and a woman will only affect the speed of drawing the sword.

I don't know why it looks a bit awkward.