Entertainment-Love Life Skills System

A mage can actually engage in melee combat with less than twenty physical means of damage. Has his brain been kicked by a donkey or blown up? Can you have a bit of magic spirit? You are a mage, not a reckless man. You are playing fart melee combat with a hairy iron sword. Who are you showing off to me? You can do something in seconds, why do you want to get involved?

As soon as I saw the word harem on the label, I gave it up decisively. It was too difficult for me. Is there no one with a single heroine?

Since the protagonist has master-level strength, can he drive a tram and injure his leg?

Brother, you are a killer, how can you kill someone and then chat with him about family matters? If you don't have the essence of writing, you should just write sand sculptures. It's ruthless and ruthless to kill you.

A moment of silence for the anti-epidemic warriors and the dead people!

Mainly attracted by the cute little Yaoyao, but the shortcomings are also obvious in the back. I was a reject at first and then became a huge pervert. I will not reject anyone who comes. Three or five female protagonists are enough, more will be water, and I will prepare a cuckold for myself. It is not a year or two, it is a lifetime. There are too many female protagonists, and they are destined to be left out again. They are all the proud women who are left out. If you don't hunt for a surprise, it would be strange for you to be cuckolded.

You give away the three treatment accessories casually. I'm really convinced. Are you a wealthy person? Are you not? Are you short of money? You are short of money. You have no capital accumulation and you want to be a rich man. You can't even buy a house. I really don't know whether I should call you stupid or second-rate.

The main line is a bit vague Character dialogue: vague, I don't know who said it. The protagonist is a bit confused. I write more about Yaoyao than the protagonist. I don't know who is the protagonist.

I found that authors don't differentiate between buying and selling, haha

There are so many beautiful young girls, but I have to take two old aunts. And I personally don't think they are particularly beautiful girls. 89 Let's forget about it. There are quite a lot of scenes.**

I hope the heroine is talented. Generally popular female stars are very ambitious, let alone acting skills. Otherwise, it would be awkward to get along with the vase for a long time, and there would be no topic to talk about, let alone "the piano and flute ensemble"

How could you not be poisoned in the first few chapters?

Why are the novels you write never able to defeat Hongjun? If you can't defeat Heavenly Dao and they are just ants, then what else is there to write about?

After reading the first chapter, the writing style is really mind-numbing.

Does an entertainment article need to be so big?

This book has been published three times! I prefer this kind of relaxed entertainment article! Other entertainment articles go further and further down the road of singing, acting, and pretending! This book does not focus on singing and acting. Acting comes later! I think the main highlight of this book lies in the children of Yaoyao and Pigfoot! Very funny! Of course this is a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it! Come on, author!

At least use the snack Song Zhuerdi Lireba Yangmi. Don't you feel uncomfortable watching it? It only takes a few minutes to make it. You have to use such an awkward homophony.

If the system changes the protagonist's personality, doesn't he become the system controller? The system is just a tool. If the protagonist changes his personality, is he still the same person?

There was no Three Corpses Enlightenment Method before Hongjun preached.

It's pretty cool, why isn't it updated?

Can the author add Zheng Shuang and Tan Songyun?

My girlfriend flew away, she was from Guangxi's ** project! Alas, I'm sorry, I can't afford this! No worries about being single!

You shouldn't have asked that kid's grandma to leave when she first started delivering food!

It's really stretched at the beginning, so the energy is fake!

Whether the author is a buyer or not

The writing is okay, but if you are writing about campus, you should be more youthful, it is a bit too much.

Can the writing style be improved? Can you check it after you finish writing it? Lots of typos.

Personally I think it's pretty good, but there are a lot of typos.

Commentary on Chapter 726: Practicing Boxing and Playing in "Entertainment Love Life Skill System" written by Guangming Longyan.

The colon in front is too uncomfortable to look at. It is best to state who said what and who said it at the beginning, and then say one sentence after another. Don't use colons all the time. Just quote one sentence at a time. Then in the live broadcast room, just use quotation marks one sentence at a time. If you can change the previous one, it's better to change it next.