From Prince to Supreme Heavenly Court

If your writing is good, you will be criticized for being boring and only showing off your literary talents and being flashy. The subject matter is good, but I was criticized for not having literary talent and being blunt. If you have literary talent and good subject matter, you can basically become a great master. But there is a big characteristic in Feilu. No matter which of the above situations happens, you will be sprayed.

Author, I hope you understand that you are here to help human monsters evolve. People told him to go away, but the protagonist still licked and did it. As soon as we said it, we told you to kill him. Also, the protagonist came from modern time and here said that we ignored this and didn't tell you to kill him. Do you really don't understand? I asked you not to write such an unpleasant plot. If you don't write it, will he appear? Will we be unhappy? Are we going to bitch here? Will there be any anger? Do you think about sex? Is this what an emperor is like? Huanyunchao, I also like beauties, and I also like novels that contain all the beauties, but not Licking. You said that we ignored that the protagonist traveled from modern times, then did you ignore that the protagonist has already traveled through time and is already an emperor? In the future, the rulers of heaven and fortune will be neither domineering nor decisive in killing. Did we ignore it or did you ignore it? They traveled through time and still acted with modern thoughts. You didn't even look at where the protagonist traveled through time and what his identity was.

The most ruthless imperial family, where this is the case, you should not write about this child. Since ancient times, it is not uncommon to kill brothers for the throne. Even if you have traveled through time, you should have common sense. In other worlds, you generally have to rely on yourself. If you are not ruthless, you will not be able to stand firmly.

Let's change the slogan. Long live Tiantian, long live long live. After all, he is also the Immortal King. Long live him. Wouldn't it be a curse on him? Wouldn't it be better to change it to an immortal with eternal blessings and a life equal to that of Heaven?

Does the novel you write have to use someone else's protagonist? Even Xiao Yan, a ruthless person, came out in the writing of Yun Dynasty. Isn't it funny to watch? Can't you write your own original work?

Feilu is like this, yy from beginning to end, yy, only follows trends, the writing style is blunt and does not have a strong sense of substitution, there is nothing more than embarrassing remarks, it is not as good-looking as the previous works, oh, when will this end?

This protagonist is too weak. His peers are several levels higher than him. He was a prince before, but he didn't even have the innate talent. Too useless.

Author, your writing is very good, but what you write is about the struggle for hegemony and fortune, which is about governing the world. It is impossible to upgrade just by having experience like upgrading the game! I have read more than a hundred chapters. From an ordinary person on earth, he became emperor in 3 years and destroyed several world-level forces. It is no problem for you to have systematic force, but your local governance is not something you can upgrade. A dynasty as big as yours can be completely reformed in one year. I think you can extend the timeline a little longer. After all, it is an immortal world, and it will not end in a short period of time. You can also write about the affairs of governing the world. Either the whole article is about fighting, or it is on the way to fighting. A little personal advice!

If you want to prove that you can evolve your bloodline, you don't need to add it. If someone tells you "go away" and you still shamelessly allow others to evolve their monsters, there must be a limit to how you can do it.

Author, your book has no soul, the protagonist is too useless, the portrayal is not vivid, and the temperament cannot be written by you. You have to show it through your usual actions, and don't act like an emperor as soon as you open your mouth. It's really embarrassing.