I Travel Through the Heavens in My Dreams

At the end, the protagonist wakes up from the mental hospital and discovers that everything was a dream

Forget the previous one, don't write about the Pirate Empress if you don't accept it, what the hell is a renouncer? You want to write about pleasant things, not about depression. If not, you have to give us some room for expectation and imagination. Isn't it interesting that you don't accept that one, don't want that one, and often bring a man with you and the heroine? If you really want to respect the original work, you won't read the fanfic.

I stopped watching after seeing the protagonist spread martial arts at will in reality.

I hope the author will not flatter himself about traditional Chinese medicine and martial arts. Traditional Chinese medicine is not martial arts. Thank you, please don't indulge yourself. As for the spread of Chinese martial arts, it is even more speechless. It is enough to keep fit and exercise regularly. How about spreading Chinese martial arts across the country? Can other countries really learn this? As for the practice of national martial arts among all people, what is the difference between this and the holding of guns by all people? Do you think all citizens are Ip Man? Believe it or not, state murders and various violent incidents have increased dozens of times, and those victims must want to kill the whole family of you, the culprit.

Chu Mo has such an elegant name. It's a pity that his surname is Xiong. Bajie has such a high-end name. It's a pity that his surname is Zhu. What a poetic name for Fisherman's Song. It's a pity that his last name is Zhang. What an annoying name at the top. It's a pity that his surname is Yang. What an annoying name for Ziteng. It's a pity that his surname is Du. Jingbin is such an elegant name. It's a pity that his surname is Shen. What a beautiful name Yue Jing is, but it's a pity that her surname is Liu Zhenxiang has such a delicate name. It's a pity that her surname is Shi

Disadvantage 1: Get through without rebelling Second, how much do you like Japan and Japanese culture? Why don't you become Japanese? Third, I really vomited. If you don't accept the harem article, don't write it in detail. If you write it in detail and don't accept it, you are not giving away the girl. So to sum up, let's boycott this mentally retarded author.

Would you rather not kill than kill a good person? If the protagonist lets a bad guy go, how many good people can this bad guy kill? These should all be attributed to the protagonist, the Madonna who feels nondescript and has weird concepts

There is no sense of immersion at all. Are you writing a composition for primary school students???

Opening a harem in a dream, a master of wet dreams???

This author always likes avatars and cuckolds, and the books he writes are extremely poisonous! This book is even more extreme, it flows directly from a dream, and the author feels good about himself. I just want to ask, don't you think it's green?!