Immortal and Mortal Farm

The paragraphs are too dense and it makes your eyes dazzled

Friends who are still chasing this book can come over and give a thumbs up when they have time to let the author know how many of our friends are still supporting the author. The author would like to thank everyone for their company along the way.

Can you please add more punctuation marks? It gives me a headache.

The segmentation is a bit clumsy, and there are too many dialogues between the characters.

How many 24 hours will it take? Only then can I read, so slowly

It's so dazzling that it's not divided into sections?

I can read the next few chapters, but I can't read the previous chapters. Can I change it? You'd better change it or no one will see it.

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There are a lot of typos and omissions, and it's hard to read.

I suggest the author read it himself and see if he can continue reading it. There are too many typos.