Film and TV: From the Start, I Possess Liu Xing

I wish you a happy family, a successful career, a wife as beautiful as a flower, a family full of children and grandchildren, a car, a luxury car, a house, a mansion, and a savings of 1 billion!

After reading a few chapters, let me share my thoughts! Let's talk about the protagonist first. I read these chapters and the protagonist rarely leaves the factory. There is also the protagonist's family. The mother of the protagonist faces Xiaoxue and Xiaoyu, not to mention Xiaoxue and Xiaoyu's siblings hug together to keep warm. Xiaoxue can't stand the protagonist bullying Xiaoyu, and Xiaoyu always throws the blame to the protagonist. He has no family status at all! Can't the protagonist have a bit of a temper himself? Never heard that you should hit your brother early? When you see Dai Mingming, you are instinctively afraid, and after running after you for a while, you become a shadow. What is the psychological quality of the protagonist? You don't need to write about showing off and slapping people in the face, but it shouldn't be too routine. The protagonist has so many skills, what can he do if you don't have enough words! I think it's better for Xiaoxue not to accept it, so I'll leave it at that for now, and then I'll see if I have anything to complain about.

The writing is good, why is it a eunuch?

Author, blades at the ready

The author is dead and the paper is being burned

It's pretty good, but updates are discontinued.

Instead of replacing the original character, you can write that the protagonist is an orphan or something.

I hope the heroine is not a weirdo represented by Qiao Yingzi. There are too many heroines in Feilu fandoms who are Qiao Yingzi, and they are almost spoiled.

The introduction is good, but Weiwei is Xiaoxue's classmate and has graduated. Is it interesting to write about Weiwei?

Xiaoxue's age doesn't match up! Graduating from Tsinghua University at the age of 21?