Age of Elves: Starting Palkia

Is Palkia invincible? Let's not talk about Arceus, even the mules and horses are stronger than Palkia.

In summary, it is very poor, with too many poisonous points, and the definition of mythical beasts is too poor. Even a first-level infant god is still a mythical beast. The content is too cliché and the plot expression is unclear.

Ah, I'm a little tired of watching it. The woman always thinks the protagonist is weak and cares about her. The protagonist confidently goes to fight, and then looks surprised, blushing, and hiding his thoughts.

It smells like a fantasy pretentious novel. The first villain is a woman. After entering the college, they live in a mixed room with a mixed roommate. The roommate is still a guy who disguises himself as a man. Then the second-largest son from aristocratic family in the school happens to be the roommate's sexual suitor. After seeing this, who doesn't know what you will write next? Just a few chapters into the book, I met quite a few young ladies from beautiful families. The title of the book might as well be changed to Elf: Young Trainer from Another World

Why don't we divide the god-level talents in more detail? Palkia is a god, and the Three Silly Birds are also gods, but can gods like the Three Silly Birds be compared with the God of Space? Wouldn't it be more comfortable to follow the popular trend of dividing gods into three, two, and first-level gods?

After seeing your comments, I suddenly didn't want to read them anymore.

A bunch of random writing. The mini dragon is obviously a quasi-god

Oh, the first place is one million, the second place is nine million?

There is something wrong, I didn't interrupt the update intentionally, and this book is purely for love, I just want to write about a world of aliens.

In addition to the history of the Ming Dynasty, it is best to also give the history of the West, especially the colonial history of the West. And the wealth gained. Without these, it is basically impossible to overturn the benevolent and friendly ancestral external appearance of our heavenly kingdom. To engage in colonial expansion.

Commentary on the chapters of "The End of the World: Beginning as Ding Xiu" written by De Jia Qian 002: De Jia Qian (new book for collection).

Too much nonsense and the protagonist's brain is too weird

Commentary on the second chapter of "Rebirth and Portable Game System" written by Brother Xiao: Game System.