Online Game and Anime: From the Start, I Get the Castle-Castle Fruit

How is this book? I would like you to give me a review and let me see if I have the motivation to continue writing, because updating two books at the same time is a bit too heavy.

I found that some novels of the same type, such as the online game Kai Zei, the online game Naruto, and the online game Kanji, all add elements of alien beasts, pollution beasts, and deep sea threats to human survival in the background. However, in the end, the background has no meaning at all, and there is no mention of the plot to fight against these threats.

These fonts are so secretive that they need to be segmented.

Can contract scrolls bring out real-world contracted people?

Some people watched it, but the people who watched it didn't comment. Come on, author, don't be too j

There are more segments. Even though there are segments, some parts are still densely packed and tiring to read on a mobile phone.

Guilty Crown is scheduled for the world-traveling mission reward, and the next common world plan for all players is to arrange a Western fantasy world similar to online games, so that players can obtain careers. If you have other opinions, please mention them later.

This book should be written better.

Isn't this a forced intelligence? Your first place is only 6,000 points less sincere. Isn't it worth it to have a burning camp?

Do you guys have any suggestions or ideas? Maybe there will be more ideas and the plot will be more reasonable.