
Fengyun: Seize Nie Feng at the Beginning
风云:开局夺舍聂风
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- Ongoing
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- 2.7M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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First of all, this Yuanlong is fake. It was eaten in front of thousands of people. No one noticed that when Xiongba was blind, Yuanlong was still a scumbag after eating it. The protagonist was a **, inconsistent, a time traveler, and a retarded person who didn't know anything about the initial plot. It's not as good as the original plot. Read it with caution. It's extremely poisonous. I've never seen such a poisonous novel.
A bastard with a wolfish heart and lungs is good for the protagonist, right? Revenge for killing his father? You, a time-traveler, said revenge is too hypocritical. Or your father-in-law, you turned your back just for a reward. You are just a puppet. As long as the martial arts cheat system is given to you, **this** protagonist will definitely choose martial arts instead of gold**
I almost died laughing. The f. W in the original Duan Lang could argue with Feng Yun for a while after taking two Long Yuan pills, but you are at this level after taking 3 pills? It's true, it's useless.
Good guy, after taking Long Yuan, your aura will increase several times, and you will have thirty years of internal strength. Is Xiongba blind? I can't see you. I can't feel the changes in your aura after taking Long Yuan.
Why are Noah's breasts so big??
Fei Lu is like a starving ghost reincarnated, what kind of author can he leave behind? A bunch of ghostwriting.
This book is extremely poisonous, and book lovers without a certain level of knowledge should not try it easily. I once had a book friend who was in the Qi training period because he did not listen to my advice and forced himself to read this book. As a result, before he even opened it, his body and soul were completely destroyed and turned into ashes! There are book friends who are in the foundation-building stage of Dzogchen and rely on their profound skills. As soon as they finished reading the first chapter, they foamed at the mouth and rolled their eyes, and they still can't close their eyes. There are also book friends who are in the golden elixir stage. They relied on the golden elixir to protect their bodies and were immune to all poisons. However, after reading the first chapter, the golden elixir collapsed and their cultivation was completely destroyed. A book friend who was at the peak of the Nascent Soul stage refused to believe in Xie and read ten chapters in one breath. Then, his grave was already three meters high! Dear book friends, I am really not being alarmist. Under the poison of this book, book friends can pile up into mountains. I really don't want anyone to sacrifice anymore! If you really want to read it, it is best to be a Mahayana master who can barely read it.
I cheated and ate three dragon yuan, but I couldn't even defeat Duanlang. What a waste.
Xiongba has no internal strength after practicing martial arts three times. How useless is this?
In the first chapter, you ate a Dragon Yuan in front of Xiong Ba? ? ? What nonsense? ? ? ?
I don't know what is written on this gauze nose
It turns out that in the author's mind, Douluo and Super God are as powerful as the others.
Giving a ** option a better reward, and giving a good option a better reward. I still choose you m! You should choose Wen Chou Chou to reward the Xuanwu True Kung Fu, and choose Nie Feng to reward the Five Tigers Broken Gate Sword. This kind of thing is called choice. Otherwise, except for the perverted one, he would choose Wen Chou Chou.
Why do I think the one who ate a whole Dragon Yuan is not as powerful as two fragments?
A dragon with only 30 years of skill. The author is really awesome.
I can't understand it at all.
You just took out a big sword so casually???
MacArthur was in Japan, how did he behead people?
I'm convinced, but I can't beat the supporting characters. Shouldn't the system dragon yuan be more powerful than the real dragon yuan? And why can Duan Lang get the Double Dragon Yuan if he is familiar with the plot? Is it just to keep the plot consistent with the comics so that the word count can be increased? The more I write, the less creative I become.
And don't insult our special forces, okay?
After taking a Dragon Yuan, I'm still a loser. I'm really drunk.
What is this? It started out as a time traveler, but suddenly it became the Nie Feng of this world with an extra system.
What kind of situation is set in this chapter? The previous mission was limited to 10 deaths, but now there are dozens of deaths? ? ?
Why does the reasonable selection system display rewards? It's better not to show it and let the protagonist make choices based on his heart
Seal? How can you really drag down the plot and the word count?
Duan Lang got two Long Yuan and tore Xu Fu directly.
Is it true that Captain Marvel's husband is his son?
Author, do you know why you rush to the street code? !
It's really a running account within a running list. This setting is okay, but the rest are all *shit.
Chuan Feng Yun is one of the worst-written stories I've ever seen, bar none. There are a lot of places to complain about. The protagonist is simply insane, and for no reason Ming Yue insists on being with him. Let's just call it love at first sight. Inexplicably, I played with You Ruo again when I was a child. Xiong Ba inexplicably wants to give you Ruo to him. Inexplicably, he suddenly became the anti-hero. What kind of selection system is there? Any fool knows how to choose. If I remember correctly, it is the Twelve Evils of Tianchi. How did it become the Twelve Evils of Jinchi? That's it. He actually wrote more than two million words.